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GunsAdmin
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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A tree
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Delteria Manager
Join Date: Feb 2012
Location: USA
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I love it good job
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Womb Raider
Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: Canada
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Awesome
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Pixels
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: Blacksburg, VA
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It doesn't feel finished. The shading could use some work, especially in the leaves. The leaves feel flat, and it doesn't seem like you had a direction for the leaves to come from and go to. The little bushel of leaves in the front-left feels odd. Overall decent effort, but again it could still use some more work. Try to apply a few of the linked tutorials to the tree, or another tree attempt. Some random tree tutorials I found via a google search. They look pretty good. http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs49/f/20...by_D_e_n_a.png http://www.vbgore.com/images/hosted/mith4.png http://0.tqn.com/d/graphicssoft/1/0/...k23-14tree.gif |
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Quack Quack~
Join Date: Sep 2011
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The leaves don't match the branch because of the outline and detail between them. Overall, nice work
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Guest
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I actually like it.
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betflip me nerd
Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: Georgia
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Well done +rep
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GunsAdmin
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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GunsAdmin
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Wizard In Training
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: A cold, barren wasteland (Wisconsin)
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I know what your problem is with the leaves. They are all the same colors. Notice the trunk of the tree. It gets darker from left to right. The leaves should also do the same, shading-wise. Do that, and it'll all mesh together pretty nicely.
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GunsAdmin
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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Ye ive since that pic darkened teh leaves outline
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Pixels
Join Date: Jan 2012
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GunsAdmin
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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Lmao
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Player.
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Pennsylvania
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Nice job Sam!
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Wizard In Training
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: A cold, barren wasteland (Wisconsin)
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That wasn't really what I was talking about. The leaves should be shaded similarly to the trunk, light coming from the left. That means lighter leaves on the left side, and the leaves get darker as you go towards the right. If you don't do that, you end up with the flat look, like what you have now ;)
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