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New Water Noodle (Feedback Please)
Hi. I just recently made this Water Noodle, such as the one you would use in a pool. It can come in different colors, but I only made blue. I was thinking it could be a sword, that will be released in the summer. Please post comments of how I can improve this, but please don't put really negative immature comments. Thanks! P.S.-When you look at the template, it looks blury. Click it, then click it again to see it full size and the least blury. |
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Looks like a blue stick 0.0 but then again water noodles are blue sticks. I think it would look a little better without the circe next to the end because nvm.. |
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But Water Noodles are round, with a small inner hole at the end...
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Getting better, although you didn't really need to use 8 colors. You could have used 2, like so:
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Yes, but it now doesn't have the effect of it looking that round, kinda made of foam, or a hole at the end how it usually does
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It needs to be a little thicker, and have more texture. It sort of looks like a wooden stick that was painted blue. When you make it thicker, you can add more texture to make it look more "pool noodle-like." Other than what I just stated, I like the idea. It's creative. Good job.
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Thanks, but I don't really understand how would I make it thicker? Do you mean more wide?
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@Dylan-Usually, at the end, there is foam, inside that foam is a hole.
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Try making it look "grainy" like a real noodle. Just add dark specks on it
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