Alpho's Music Thread

Alpho · 10-06-2015

Hey all,

Firstly, I go by Voxile in the music industry. I know I've had a few threads in the past about my music production, though I will be using this one to keep track of all of my progress, similar to how some of you have graphics threads with your progress. I'm going to start this off with 3 tracks that I'm working on right now.

1) The Feeling - https://soundcloud.com/voxileofficia...er-6th/s-imoyz
This track I'm trying to make a more mellow intro that slowly introduces the elements of the song, leading up to a powerful build up and eventually a drop. I need some help figuring out what kind of beat / genre to drop. If you have any other criticism I'd love to hear it too.

2) Stroll - https://soundcloud.com/voxileofficia...er-6th/s-nlLp3
Stroll still is really new in the production workflow, and still needs a lot of changes. There are some big parts missing between the big saws that come in half way through the song, and the intro. I plan to change a lot of the instruments used. Again, any criticism on these pieces would be much appreciated.

3) Elation - https://soundcloud.com/voxileofficia...er-6th/s-gs8zY
I have been working on Elation for over a year. The track was originally released on my soundcloud a year ago, though I never was completely happy with it, as I really haven't been with any of my tracks, I decided to remake a lot of it. The link provided shows my progress so far. I still need an outro for it; the track ends too abruptly.

Anyways, feel free to give the 3 tracks a few listens. I don't have many people to go to for help with my music; my friends don't really listen to my music / aren't fans of the genres I like, so it's tough. I appreciate any and all constructive criticism that you all have to offer.

I love you all, Thank you.

NOTE: I know we have SoundCloud tags on here, but they don't work with private links Sorry!

Kieran2820 · 10-07-2015

The 3rd one is in the arcade in era right?

This is the type of music i like ;)
On the first one, cant wait to hear the drop
The second is a really nice start
The third one. I could listen to it for ages

I would tell you how to improve it but i'm not that good at recognising flaws in music. Cant Wait to listen to more

Alpho · 10-07-2015

Posted by Kieran2820

The 3rd one is in the arcade in era right?

This is the type of music i like ;)
On the first one, cant wait to hear the drop
The second is a really nice start
The third one. I could listen to it for ages

I would tell you how to improve it but i'm not that good at recognising flaws in music. Cant Wait to listen to more

Thank you! Yes I was working on Elation and then I figured I could use part of it in my arcade on era, I changed it a little bit to fit the scene. You don't need to know a lot about music to help out, you're welcome to explain what you'd like to hear.

Nanner · 10-07-2015

Posted by Kieran2820

The 3rd one is in the arcade in era right?

This is the type of music i like ;)
On the first one, cant wait to hear the drop
The second is a really nice start
The third one. I could listen to it for ages

I would tell you how to improve it but i'm not that good at recognising flaws in music. Cant Wait to listen to more

Agreed. I like the 1st a lot

Khai · 10-07-2015

OMG THE THIRD ONE <333
Drop could use more work though. Idk, felt too fast?

Sir · 10-07-2015

the next calvin harris right here

Bay Max · 10-07-2015

can u guys tell me one admroid app that can make music like that

Nibbles · 10-07-2015

There is none

Raven Ventus* · 10-07-2015

Elation the best

Vic · 10-08-2015

Nice work, I like it all!

Jared9 · 10-08-2015

All great, but stroll is my favourite. I feel that they are lacking something tho, not sure what

Señor Albonio · 10-08-2015

Posted by Bay Max

can u guys tell me one admroid app that can make music like that

Jesus christ get a computer you ****face

G Fatal · 10-09-2015

Really interesting stuff, idk how it all works with actually making stuff? though.. are each like bar/sound your own made or is it like you get certain sounds then expand off that making longer, louder etcetc? then put them alltogether?

Overall they seem good, I think it needs more of a spark(like a real kick-in at some point in the music) Idk if that helps at all aha, I liked The Feeling one the most

Alpho · 10-20-2015

hi everyone. thanks for all of the feedback. I'm trying to finish Elation right now while juggling work and a ton of other things. check out my progress. Still need to make another verse probably and an outro. Might change up some of the sounds and add some background things. Let me know what ya'll think. thank you!!!!!<3

https://soundcloud.com/voxileofficia...-oct20/s-UlHYA

*Toy · 10-20-2015

Nice bro

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Alpho i miss u Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: 5th dimension Posts: 957	Alpho's Music Thread Hey all, Firstly, I go by Voxile in the music industry. I know I've had a few threads in the past about my music production, though I will be using this one to keep track of all of my progress, similar to how some of you have graphics threads with your progress. I'm going to start this off with 3 tracks that I'm working on right now. 1) The Feeling - https://soundcloud.com/voxileofficia...er-6th/s-imoyz This track I'm trying to make a more mellow intro that slowly introduces the elements of the song, leading up to a powerful build up and eventually a drop. I need some help figuring out what kind of beat / genre to drop. If you have any other criticism I'd love to hear it too. 2) Stroll - https://soundcloud.com/voxileofficia...er-6th/s-nlLp3 Stroll still is really new in the production workflow, and still needs a lot of changes. There are some big parts missing between the big saws that come in half way through the song, and the intro. I plan to change a lot of the instruments used. Again, any criticism on these pieces would be much appreciated. 3) Elation - https://soundcloud.com/voxileofficia...er-6th/s-gs8zY I have been working on Elation for over a year. The track was originally released on my soundcloud a year ago, though I never was completely happy with it, as I really haven't been with any of my tracks, I decided to remake a lot of it. The link provided shows my progress so far. I still need an outro for it; the track ends too abruptly. Anyways, feel free to give the 3 tracks a few listens. I don't have many people to go to for help with my music; my friends don't really listen to my music / aren't fans of the genres I like, so it's tough. I appreciate any and all constructive criticism that you all have to offer. I love you all, Thank you. NOTE: I know we have SoundCloud tags on here, but they don't work with private links Sorry!

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Kieran2820 Registered User Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 337	The 3rd one is in the arcade in era right? This is the type of music i like ;) On the first one, cant wait to hear the drop The second is a really nice start The third one. I could listen to it for ages I would tell you how to improve it but i'm not that good at recognising flaws in music. Cant Wait to listen to more

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Khai Far gone... Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: California Posts: 1,980	OMG THE THIRD ONE <333 Drop could use more work though. Idk, felt too fast?

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Sir Elder ✔️ Join Date: Oct 2012 Posts: 2,286	the next calvin harris right here

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Bay Max Registered User Join Date: Aug 2015 Location: Somewhere on earth Posts: 117	can u guys tell me one admroid app that can make music like that

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Nibbles OriginalHankHill Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Back. Posts: 448	There is none

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Raven Ventus* Ol'West and Era helper Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: Earth Posts: 48	Elation the best

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Vic Registered User Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Florida Posts: 765	Nice work, I like it all!

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Jared9 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 1,128	All great, but stroll is my favourite. I feel that they are lacking something tho, not sure what

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G Fatal Banned Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: UK Posts: 3,215	Really interesting stuff, idk how it all works with actually making stuff? though.. are each like bar/sound your own made or is it like you get certain sounds then expand off that making longer, louder etcetc? then put them alltogether? Overall they seem good, I think it needs more of a spark(like a real kick-in at some point in the music) Idk if that helps at all aha, I liked The Feeling one the most

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Alpho i miss u Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: 5th dimension Posts: 957	hi everyone. thanks for all of the feedback. I'm trying to finish Elation right now while juggling work and a ton of other things. check out my progress. Still need to make another verse probably and an outro. Might change up some of the sounds and add some background things. Let me know what ya'll think. thank you!!!!!<3 https://soundcloud.com/voxileofficia...-oct20/s-UlHYA

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*Toy Registered User Join Date: Oct 2015 Location: Australia Posts: 16	Nice bro