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11-02-2011
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BestSparrerOfAllTime
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Cyan Collection (My GFX <3)
So I was doodling on GIMP again, bored out of my skull. Of course, I know it's called "Collection" and right now theres one piece of work... But it's 10:40 and I started this weird blob pet to add to it, but im super tired and havent finished it. So I'm gonna sleep, and hopefully tomorrow (?) I'll finish it and add it. I'm gonna be adding a lot of stuff frequently (hopefully) all of which are going to be in cyan! Cyan is my favorite color and it just seems appropriate. So yay! Please give me feedback on what I have so far, but do remember I am fairly young and am used to drawing curvy lines with delicate detailed shading on paper, and that sort of.... doesnt transfer over too well. I'm still kind of learning GFX xD So all feedback is welcome, but remember to be kind, helpful and specific! (Not: OMG THIS IS SO UGLY GIVE UP NOW!! Not kind, helpful or specific Not: I think it looks weird Not very kind, helpful or specific at all Not: It looks cool lol nice Not helpful or specific Not: I think you should make it better. Not kind, helpful or specific DO: I really like the eyes on the cat, but maybe you could try making the feet more rounded? They look a bit boxy ![]() Thank you but I really hate it when people give me bad feedback) |
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11-02-2011
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a necessary evil
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I'd add more definition to the handle to separate it from the blade, maybe put the lighter cyan to the top and darker cyan at the bottom (away from th light source). At the moment it kinda just looks like a kiwi blade put through a photoshop filter. But, could be really cool with a little bit more definition!
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11-02-2011
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Procrastinating
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Sydney, Australia
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well i don't really know how to make stuff like this so well done
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11-02-2011
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Registered User
Join Date: Sep 2011
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You should add an outline. Could help a lot. Also this dark parts (view attachment below) seem not to fit. One more tip: In my mind it´s fine using the rotation tool but in the future you should try spriting your own rotation. But good job keep going. I´m sure you can make some awesome stuff ;) |
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11-03-2011
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BestSparrerOfAllTime
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Update # 2 for Ice Dagger I gave up on pet cuz It sucked too badly any ideas, anyone? |
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11-03-2011
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Registered User
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Well 2 things: For an ice dagger you should maybe go from cyan to blue/white. Also it´s a little bit too big for a dagger, would fit more a scimitar. But else a nice update |
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11-03-2011
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Hmmm. Seems a bit too gorey.. I don't know the blood just doesn't seem to fit the ice theme.. Perhaps if if was lighter or white like what callimuc said, I feel like that would make it more icy, but if your gonna make it bloody I think a more textured and weathered look would fit to make it seem old and used in battle, but then it would be grey and not cyan :/
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3rd Edit. Made everything slightly darker as to appear 'weathered'. Edited the blood. |
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11-03-2011
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Registered User
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Nice
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11-03-2011
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*eats bananner bread and bacon in celebration. confetti falls and somewhere a cheese pita burns in an oven* THATS a knife ;D
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11-04-2011
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BestSparrerOfAllTime
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:D so what should i do now? |
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11-04-2011
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A electricity elemental head or body.
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11-05-2011
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