My first gun.

Paper Bag · 12-23-2012

First gun I have ever made. I am fully aware it needs shading and more views. All steps I shall conquer in the future. What it does need is criticism.
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V. · 12-23-2012

It's too square. The shape is correct, you just need to round it off a little, add some detail and it will look pretty good. The gun needs a trigger, the mag could be more circular, too.
Would you like an example?

Paper Bag · 12-23-2012

Posted by V.

It's too square. The shape is correct, you just need to round it off a little, add some detail and it will look pretty good. The gun needs a trigger, the mag could be more circular, too.
Would you like an example?

Why not?

ESD_Hyaku · 12-25-2012

It has potential. Just stick to it.

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Paper Bag Banned Join Date: Dec 2012 Posts: 94	First gun I have ever made. I am fully aware it needs shading and more views. All steps I shall conquer in the future. What it does need is criticism. http://piq.codeus.net/static/media/userpics/piq_71679_400x400.png (Unsupported image host) http://piq.codeus.net/static/media/userpics/piq_71712_400x400.png (Unsupported image host) Last edited by Paper Bag; 12-23-2012 at 04:24 PM. Reason: Updated.

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V. .47 Join Date: Jul 2012 Location: Wundahland! Posts: 1,921	It's too square. The shape is correct, you just need to round it off a little, add some detail and it will look pretty good. The gun needs a trigger, the mag could be more circular, too. Would you like an example?

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ESD_Hyaku Registered User Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: Your house Posts: 89	It has potential. Just stick to it.