01-01-2013
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An Asian
Join Date: May 2012
Location: japan
Posts: 252
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Hey guys, many of you wanted my second part, however I am busy with school, etc. I am a newly selected student leader for my school and I have many jobs to do. So I am not able to continue writing the other parts. I would still be Morderating the forums at Mooproductions.webs.com And I would check the daily news on iZone. Hope you see you guys soon, peace out! And a happy new year! |
01-03-2013
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Writer of Stories
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: The Danger Zone
Posts: 2,207
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I think the 3,000 year war with the evolving baddies sounds really good, but this one sounds cool too. Although it must be kept in mind, classic and era are supposed to be the same place, just different eras. Zone is supposed to take place in a space station above the futuresque world of graal. And the surface map should be era then, not classic. Why would medieval graalians have a space station? |
01-03-2013
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Registered User
Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 2,956
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01-04-2013
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Graalian
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Belle Isle
Posts: 4,481
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Describe the battle. I'm a **** writer but it needs to be addressed. Example: The Graal Army fought valiantly against the foreign machines. The fireballs and magic of the Classic Graalians engulfed the battlefield in flames and a thick heavy smoke. The knights swords proved to have no effect on the well built monsters and the Umbrellas, daggers and guns of the people of Era were destroyed. The monsters shot their lasers faster than the Classic Mages. Their machine guns piercing the poor Graalians. The cries of men and woman...men and woman that would never return to their homes...their families. Among them a child named (insert name here) had just seen his/her family slaughtered by the evil machines. INTRO FOR MAIN CHARACTER
Last edited by iHot; 01-04-2013 at 02:03 AM.
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