The true story behind Graal Classic

Kyle Del. M. H. · 10-09-2014

I must tell this story before they come for me, and take me. I don't have much time before death has arisen to me. But here it is.
The beginning
It all began when classic was divided into 2 nations. The Graalians and the zorbis. There were 2 main leaders. Master Stefan and Zorbi King. One day a little boy named dusty faced a terrifying experience, his graal family had been killed. Dusty cried for days until he saw water near him and knew the zorbis had done something to them. Dusty had wanted revenge; he made plans, blueprints, sharper swords. Dusty had learned in n out of the Zorbi Castle and he was going to prank the Zorbis and eventually murder the Zorbi King. Dusty did the little things at first. Put whoopie cushions on the king's chair, ding donged ditch the king’s castle, and even put spiders in the king's soup. One day Dusty made a grand scheme. He would put a dead human hand in the cauldron of the king's kitchen. Dusty didn't realize that what he thought was soup was a replication liquid that makes more zorbis. After a few days the Graal News has been showing "BREAKING NEWS: A NEW SPECIES HAS BEEN CREATED." Dusty didn't know what it was. He then looked outside and saw what we graalians call today as baddies. The arm dusty put in was his fathers. And since his father's DNA was within the arm the baddies only respond to Dusty's command. Dusty knew this was his big plan. He then got all the baddies and told them to take the Zorbi King alive!
After a few days, they finally captured the Zorbi King in his sleep. When Dusty saw him he told him "WHY DID YOU KILL MY FAMILY!" dusty exclaimed. The Zorbi King was confused at first but knew what Dusty meant. "Your parents tried to overthrow us Zorbis and destroy our species; We should've killed you too!" Zorbi King said. Dusty was still mad, then Dusty got the baddy's weapon and sliced the Zorbi King's head off and burned the body only leaving the Zorbi King's head as a souvenir. Dusty became evil and angered. He then threatened both Graalians and Zorbis to make him leader or they all die. A few decades of slavery and suffering have gone by. People were fed up with Dusty but they knew the power dusty can have on. Master Stefan became a slave and was dying. Stefan's sons (Thallen, Runedevil, ph8,Crono, and Rufus) were told to save his title and regain peace within the classic. They knew they had to think quickly. They began hiding in the woods and began training their strengths becoming ultimate champions. One day Rufus sneaked into Dusty's HQ and stole a very secretive liquid. He didn't know what it was and tasted a lil bit. Rufus felt stronger and powerful. Rufus knew it was invincibility. He figured out the recipe and replicated it and feeding it to his brothers and his father. They then made armor, weapons, and created an army out of graalians. They then fought off Dusty. Dusty summoned his Baddy army while the Stefan sons were with their graalians army. Blood was drawn left and right. Stefan against Dusty. Graalians against baddies. Dusty knew they took the invincibility. And dusty took out his mysterious pencil and he placed tiles that are not passable around the graalians. Dusty's pencil can make tiles and levels. His pencil could destroy them all. Dusty then took away Stefan's life and removed his invincibility. Stefan's son all formed together and used a new type of magic. That magic denied all of dusty's powers and they fought dusty. Dusty was pretty strong and fought them all back using jiu jitsu. Eventually Dusty was cornered while the Stefan sons were bloody and breathless. They pointed their swords at him but they forgot all about the baddies. They imprisoned all the other Graalians and were surrounding the Stefan sons.
Runedevil did quick thinking and took some of Dusty's blood and placed it on all of his brothers. All the baddies now were controlled by the brothers and were told to never cause war again and to listen to anyone. They did forget to not harm any Graalian so now they are still hurting graalians and changing themselves to pyrats, regular baddies, and many other things like spiders and blobs. They then used some sort of magical potion and turned Dusty into a good person. Dusty then expanded Graal into a happy healthy environment. But then when everything was all good. The Zorbis are planning on an attack on classic for the next millennia. Zorbis have been guarding their plan forever and they are planning on war to destroy classic and revive their king.
Now I must go. I have to tell you this before the Zorbis take me again. The Zorbis have something we don't have! It’s... “Hey we found him sir! Kill him!" says multiple zorbis.

Sicx · 10-09-2014

Spell check please. I'd advise this website -> http://www.wikihow.com/Edit-or-Proof...Essay-or-Paper. Creative story other than that

Summertime Love · 10-09-2014

Thought it was just to kill players and get cool outfits by making game currency but yours seems like a bit of a reach

Kyle Del. M. H. · 10-09-2014

Posted by Sicx

Spell check please. I'd advise this website -> http://www.wikihow.com/Edit-or-Proof...Essay-or-Paper. Creative story other than that

I did not feel like making an essay properly when my life was on the line.

Kendama · 10-09-2014

This was kinda stale

Kyle Del. M. H. · 10-09-2014

Posted by Kendama

This was kinda stale

But then again, I'm not Dr.Seuss or Robert Frost.

TWIZ · 10-09-2014

It was pretty good at the beginning but at the end it was meh

Thallen · 10-10-2014

boi, something is wrong with you

Zoologist · 10-10-2014

Well, now i'm reminded why i don't use graalians much.

Vivid · 10-10-2014

lmao i assumed rufus was older than dusty

Xenice · 10-10-2014

Someone must've been really bored - and I mean REALLY bored.

Narcosis · 10-10-2014

I actually enjoyed it. Though I read the whole thing, from start to finish. I can appreciate creative fan-fiction.

I would actually love for something really big to happen in-game when the Zorbi content is finally released. Something game-shatteringly big. Like all of Graal City being destroyed (not permanently), and baddies running amuck. Oh to think of what could be..

MrSimons · 10-11-2014

Posted by Zoologist

Well, now i'm reminded why i don't use graalians much.

i thought it was a good read.

MisaChan · 10-11-2014

As the zorbi attacked classic, Zorbi saw those babies at the Adoption center, The Zorbi race was Halfed! THE BABIES ARE THE HEROS, But there was a Rebel against them.

The Babies fought against thy Graalians... And the story was remained unknown. THE END.

Crono · 10-11-2014

lol @runedevil

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Kyle Del. M. H. Registered User Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: BTK Posts: 500	The true story behind Graal Classic I must tell this story before they come for me, and take me. I don't have much time before death has arisen to me. But here it is. The beginning It all began when classic was divided into 2 nations. The Graalians and the zorbis. There were 2 main leaders. Master Stefan and Zorbi King. One day a little boy named dusty faced a terrifying experience, his graal family had been killed. Dusty cried for days until he saw water near him and knew the zorbis had done something to them. Dusty had wanted revenge; he made plans, blueprints, sharper swords. Dusty had learned in n out of the Zorbi Castle and he was going to prank the Zorbis and eventually murder the Zorbi King. Dusty did the little things at first. Put whoopie cushions on the king's chair, ding donged ditch the king’s castle, and even put spiders in the king's soup. One day Dusty made a grand scheme. He would put a dead human hand in the cauldron of the king's kitchen. Dusty didn't realize that what he thought was soup was a replication liquid that makes more zorbis. After a few days the Graal News has been showing "BREAKING NEWS: A NEW SPECIES HAS BEEN CREATED." Dusty didn't know what it was. He then looked outside and saw what we graalians call today as baddies. The arm dusty put in was his fathers. And since his father's DNA was within the arm the baddies only respond to Dusty's command. Dusty knew this was his big plan. He then got all the baddies and told them to take the Zorbi King alive! After a few days, they finally captured the Zorbi King in his sleep. When Dusty saw him he told him "WHY DID YOU KILL MY FAMILY!" dusty exclaimed. The Zorbi King was confused at first but knew what Dusty meant. "Your parents tried to overthrow us Zorbis and destroy our species; We should've killed you too!" Zorbi King said. Dusty was still mad, then Dusty got the baddy's weapon and sliced the Zorbi King's head off and burned the body only leaving the Zorbi King's head as a souvenir. Dusty became evil and angered. He then threatened both Graalians and Zorbis to make him leader or they all die. A few decades of slavery and suffering have gone by. People were fed up with Dusty but they knew the power dusty can have on. Master Stefan became a slave and was dying. Stefan's sons (Thallen, Runedevil, ph8,Crono, and Rufus) were told to save his title and regain peace within the classic. They knew they had to think quickly. They began hiding in the woods and began training their strengths becoming ultimate champions. One day Rufus sneaked into Dusty's HQ and stole a very secretive liquid. He didn't know what it was and tasted a lil bit. Rufus felt stronger and powerful. Rufus knew it was invincibility. He figured out the recipe and replicated it and feeding it to his brothers and his father. They then made armor, weapons, and created an army out of graalians. They then fought off Dusty. Dusty summoned his Baddy army while the Stefan sons were with their graalians army. Blood was drawn left and right. Stefan against Dusty. Graalians against baddies. Dusty knew they took the invincibility. And dusty took out his mysterious pencil and he placed tiles that are not passable around the graalians. Dusty's pencil can make tiles and levels. His pencil could destroy them all. Dusty then took away Stefan's life and removed his invincibility. Stefan's son all formed together and used a new type of magic. That magic denied all of dusty's powers and they fought dusty. Dusty was pretty strong and fought them all back using jiu jitsu. Eventually Dusty was cornered while the Stefan sons were bloody and breathless. They pointed their swords at him but they forgot all about the baddies. They imprisoned all the other Graalians and were surrounding the Stefan sons. Runedevil did quick thinking and took some of Dusty's blood and placed it on all of his brothers. All the baddies now were controlled by the brothers and were told to never cause war again and to listen to anyone. They did forget to not harm any Graalian so now they are still hurting graalians and changing themselves to pyrats, regular baddies, and many other things like spiders and blobs. They then used some sort of magical potion and turned Dusty into a good person. Dusty then expanded Graal into a happy healthy environment. But then when everything was all good. The Zorbis are planning on an attack on classic for the next millennia. Zorbis have been guarding their plan forever and they are planning on war to destroy classic and revive their king. Now I must go. I have to tell you this before the Zorbis take me again. The Zorbis have something we don't have! It’s... “Hey we found him sir! Kill him!" says multiple zorbis. Last edited by Kyle Del. M. H.; 10-09-2014 at 10:54 PM.

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Sicx Registered Sarcastic User Join Date: Oct 2012 Location: ⓝⓞ Posts: 1,015	Spell check please. I'd advise this website -> http://www.wikihow.com/Edit-or-Proof...Essay-or-Paper. Creative story other than that

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Summertime Love Conversational Lush Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Home Posts: 136	Thought it was just to kill players and get cool outfits by making game currency but yours seems like a bit of a reach

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Kendama Delteria Manager Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: USA Posts: 2,474	This was kinda stale

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TWIZ Banned Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: fighting alt-right Posts: 2,570	It was pretty good at the beginning but at the end it was meh

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Thallen Enguard & Alumni Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 5,773	boi, something is wrong with you

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Zoologist A Jack of all trades Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Tortuga Posts: 1,393	Well, now i'm reminded why i don't use graalians much.

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Vivid Hey Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: FL, USA Posts: 1,547	lmao i assumed rufus was older than dusty

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Xenice Custom User Title Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: Winterfell Posts: 583	Someone must've been really bored - and I mean REALLY bored.

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Narcosis I Amuse Myself Join Date: May 2014 Location: Canada Posts: 694	I actually enjoyed it. Though I read the whole thing, from start to finish. I can appreciate creative fan-fiction. I would actually love for something really big to happen in-game when the Zorbi content is finally released. Something game-shatteringly big. Like all of Graal City being destroyed (not permanently), and baddies running amuck. Oh to think of what could be..

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MisaChan Banned Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Under your Bed Posts: 670	As the zorbi attacked classic, Zorbi saw those babies at the Adoption center, The Zorbi race was Halfed! THE BABIES ARE THE HEROS, But there was a Rebel against them. The Babies fought against thy Graalians... And the story was remained unknown. THE END.

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Crono :pluffy: Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Sweden Posts: 5,944	lol @runedevil