Graphics Critique Center - 7

Ryan · 03-02-2013

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MrSimons · 03-02-2013

Posted by Ryan

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Hat in Nafets.

Stryk · 03-03-2013

Posted by Nituco Rage*

Lollipop Glasses?

How about something like this?

*Vatec · 03-03-2013

Posted by Stryk

How about something like this?

JesterTheCat · 03-06-2013

Posted by Yogy*

This is a car I made in paint. This is my first time making a car so many shading and details are wrong. I am also not sure about the sizes of it (maybe its too big) so if anybody has a car template I would like to use it to fix the sizes of my car. Thnx.

That car burns my eyes >.< it is gradient looking and so I would say work on shading better.

Sup3rn00b · 03-06-2013

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all my main projects.
shading is hard fo me so yeahh..

Talon · 03-06-2013

Hi friends.

How does this look to you guys? Anything I can do to touch up on it? (Feel free to nitpick, that's where art's foundation lays)

(made with GIMP 2.8, took a little over an hour)

Myst · 03-06-2013

Posted by Sup3rn00b

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all my main projects.
shading is hard fo me so yeahh..

your gfx looks real flat, i have problems with shading too xD

Sup3rn00b · 03-07-2013

Posted by Myst

your graphical artwork looks real flat, i have problems with shading too xD

Yeah, i know, Shading is my weakness, i can make shapes pretty well though..
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Posted by Talon

Hi friends.

How does this look to you guys? Anything I can do to touch up on it? (Feel free to nitpick, that's where art's foundation lays)

(made with GIMP 2.8, took a little over an hour)

Posted by Sup3rn00b

Ooohhh... Ita ahriiii. I agree, the text does look really nice on there, the font(s) also seems to fit well with the theme.

Motrox · 03-07-2013

Posted by Sup3rn00b

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all my main projects.
shading is hard fo me so yeahh..

I did a small edit.
-Took out the jagged parts.
-Fixed the shape a bit.
- Switched some colors.

Sup3rn00b · 03-07-2013

Posted by Motrox

I did a small edit.
-Took out the jagged parts.
-Fixed the shape a bit.
- Switched some colors.

I really like the shading and the color.

And it was supposed to say "Dum" but watever, I like it all the same. I might try some more stuff later.

Sup3rn00b · 03-07-2013

Posted by Motrox

That's an N xD. kinda looks like an M though.

I know on yours its an N, but on mine it was supposed to be an M lol.

Motrox · 03-07-2013

haha read that wrong. Thought it supposed to be an N at first lol

Zay · 03-14-2013

http://imageshack.us/a/img443/2011/winchester1.jpg (Unsupported image host)

what do you think?

Maikeru · 03-19-2013

Posted by Zay

http://imageshack.us/a/img443/2011/winchester1.jpg (Unsupported image host)

what do you think?

Why is it JPG'd? That's a no-no in any case of spriting.

Save it as PNG next time

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