Gambit, have you missed a few grades, or forgotten how to read? The pause was no fault of ours. Some people actually enjoyed the play and can comprehend a scripting problem which was quickly fixed. And I thought you were educated. Or able to.. I dunno? Not act like an idiot?  

Posted by Izarin Rofocale

Gambit, have you missed a few grades, or forgotten how to read? The pause was no fault of ours. Some people actually enjoyed the play and can comprehend a scripting problem which was quickly fixed. And I thought you were educated. Or able to.. I dunno? Not act like an idiot?

Seriously, every time i come across a topic, i see people trying to be the better person in that topic.. *Cough* Epic Kolossals Topic *Cough*

Anyways, it sounded like the first play was at an average rating. I was gonna give it a terrible rating for the speech pauses but it was ok.

And seriously, have you guys even tested the scripts before doing the play? You should have.. You people had alot of free time with your hands on this one. No one screws up in the middle of a play. Thats embarrassing you know.. And that put no scare freight in anyone.. Just pure boredom..  

Posted by Maikeru

Seriously, every time i come across a topic, i see people trying to be the better person in that topic.. *Cough* Epic Kolossals Topic *Cough*

Anyways, it sounded like the first play was at an average rating. I was gonna give it a terrible rating for the speech pauses but it was ok.

And seriously, have you guys even tested the scripts before doing the play? You should have.. You people had alot of free time with your hands on this one. No one screws up in the middle of a play. Thats embarrassing you know.. And that put no scare freight in anyone.. Just pure boredom..

You make very good points, and the majority of the problems came from Tucker, who didn't give two damns about his grammar and such, and Vlad, who wasn't even supposed to be in the play. Alas, our true Bryan was entirely absent. And we did practice. Every night. Tucker skipped most. Didn't work on his grammar or punctuation, and Storm and I are both unimpressed. Elly should have kicked him. But that's an entirely different rant. :/  

People were saying it sucked and they didn't even mention the misspells and bad grammar  

That thing was full after 2 seconds yesterday. Just looked away for 2 seconds and saw than that it was oppened but closed the same time cause it was too full.  

9/10 i luved the special effects  

Lmao that's funny I forgot how iza spelled long log don't try and bash on me if you forgot to put a N in long especially if you were in the play.  

Posted by Gambit Drakul

Lmao that's funny I forgot how iza spelled long log don't try and bash on me if you forgot to put a N in long especially if you were in the play.

What, in the play? When there were 90 people, all moving, with my horribly broken iPod? You're so right. I have no right to talk. Since, you know.. I can't type with grammar on my own or anything. -cough sarcasm cough-  

Your sarcasm sucks tbh  

Posted by Gambit Drakul

Your sarcasm sucks tbh

Only if you have the intelligence and behavior of a donkey.  

No it still sucks  

Posted by S. Serenity

*SPOILER ALERT* if you haven't seen the play you may want to stop reading

This play was right around my expectations. Comic relief from hermes and vlad (and a couple other characters at times) kept me interested enough for a while. Of course they were killed off a little later. Towards the end writing went down the hole and the play became predictable and boring. There were more typos and words left out in sentences than I expected as well. Although, it was something new and it was virtually free. So for a first play, take a bow and look to improve next time.
*keep in mind I saw the second showing, and this is just my personal opinion

Write your own review here. Try not to clog it up with arguments though. That gets annoying.

 

Posted by TylerMysTe

Originally Posted by S. Serenity
Write your own review here. Try not to clog it up with arguments though. That gets annoying.

Yea. What he said he said. Gambit, wanna fight me, do it on Graal, not here.  

I dont think the grammar and typing was really a huge deal. It was easy to see what they meant to type. I was more focused on the play itself  

Which version did you go see? In my opinion, the second was probably the best except for the fact that one of our cast kept getting warped out in her scene. Not too much improv on Vlad and Tucker's part.