Posted by Talon

The main problem is the shape. Snipers aren't just big prisms with barrels. Also, try raising the scope a little. Scopes are never mounted like that. The stock is also way too large, and the trigger/handguard is awkwardly shaped. The clip is too far forward on the rifle, it should generally be under the scope. Try using a Ruger M77 as a reference image, the result should look nice if done correctly.

I wanted it to be unique thats why i did that. But thanks for the tips.But the thing i dont get is how to shade a gun..if i shade it like an object it'd look weird..  

Posted by Billy

I wanted it to be unique thats why i did that. But thanks for the tips.But the thing i dont get is how to shade a gun..if i shade it like an object it'd look weird..

make everything a little darker? :o