Pimpsy's art thread - 3

Pimpsy G. · 02-21-2016

More progress, getting close! I just need to tweak some things and pose it now

Posted by Pr0m4N V.14

Your Steven Universe Art looks official, like it was used in one of the episodes. You did a good job on it.

Thanks!

Ivy · 02-21-2016

Interesting

Pimpsy G. · 02-29-2016

Finished saitama. Any tips? Criticisms?

Ivy · 02-29-2016

Tip: make a naked version ;)

Also, the crotch area looks kind of odd. Shouldn't it be be bulging out a bit, considering that saitama is an umm... One punch man

BADUM TISS

Shurikan · 02-29-2016

Wow man this is freaking awesome. I got so inspired just looking at it. I love the flow of the cape, it just looks so fluid.

This is hard to critic because its honestly above my level of expertise with 3D design at this point. However from an 2D design perspective and with figure drawing it would be interesting if you gave the hips and shoulders a bit of tilt. (Nothing too serious just enough to offset the perfect alignment just a tad)

For the hips:
The foot that is planted on the ground would shift the hip on that side up a bit, while the other side sagged down.

For the shoulders:
The shoulder above the planted leg and raised hip will be a bit lower than the other shoulder.

I know you are probably super busy but if you have time to try and changes I think this would be interesting. I have attached a reference (more exaggerated than you will probably want.) to help you visualize my words if what I am typing is complete rubbish. Great work dude, very impressive.

Pimpsy G. · 02-29-2016

Posted by Shurikan

Wow man this is freaking awesome. I got so inspired just looking at it. I love the flow of the cape, it just looks so fluid.

This is hard to critic because its honestly above my level of expertise with 3D design at this point. However from an 2D design perspective and with figure drawing it would be interesting if you gave the hips and shoulders a bit of tilt. (Nothing too serious just enough to offset the perfect alignment just a tad)

For the hips:
The foot that is planted on the ground would shift the hip on that side up a bit, while the other side sagged down.

For the shoulders:
The shoulder above the planted leg and raised hip will be a bit lower than the other shoulder.

I know you are probably super busy but if you have time to try and changes I think this would be interesting. I have attached a reference (more exaggerated than you will probably want.) to help you visualize my words if what I am typing is complete rubbish. Great work dude, very impressive.

Thanks so much! This is for a portfolio so I want it to be as good as possible so I spent a lot of time on it lol. That's actually a really good idea and I compeltley forgot about angling the hips and shoulders. I should easily be able to do that.

Pimpsy G. · 03-09-2016

Changed the lighting, didn't really have time to do that yet.

Also here's another thing i finished a while ago but fixed up a bit for my portfolio

Bram- · 03-09-2016

Posted by Pimpsy G.

Changed the lighting, didn't really have time to do that yet.

Also here's another thing i finished a while ago but fixed up a bit for my portfolio

Freakin awesome but wouldn't he look more badass without the black dots in his eyes?

Pimpsy G. · 03-09-2016

Posted by Bram-

Freakin awesome but wouldn't he look more badass without the black dots in his eyes?

those are pupils and i think it would look kind of strange to not have pupils

Bram- · 03-09-2016

Posted by Pimpsy G.

those are pupils and i think it would look kind of strange to not have pupils

Idk it's just something about the eyes I don't like.

Pimpsy G. · 03-09-2016

Posted by Bram-

Idk it's just something about the eyes I don't like.

Yeah someone else told me that but i cant see whats wrong and it looks fine to me so i dont really know if i can figure out whats throwing people off

Ivy · 03-09-2016

The eyes look perfectly fine to me

KristenGW · 03-09-2016

I think the reason that the eyes bug people is that the rest of the figure has lots of shading (which looks great) but the eyes are just white with black dots, kind of making them seem plain. Sorry if that doesn't make sense

Neil · 03-09-2016

Posted by Pimpsy G.

Finished saitama. Any tips? Criticisms?

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Pimpsy G. · 03-10-2016

New version, made the lighting more dark and put some shadows on em

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Ivy Earning Unix dem stacks Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: In a fox hole somewhere Posts: 7,391	Interesting

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Pimpsy G. Professional Burger Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: McDonalds Posts: 2,564	Finished saitama. Any tips? Criticisms?

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Shurikan Shurikan Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 1,245	Wow man this is freaking awesome. I got so inspired just looking at it. I love the flow of the cape, it just looks so fluid. This is hard to critic because its honestly above my level of expertise with 3D design at this point. However from an 2D design perspective and with figure drawing it would be interesting if you gave the hips and shoulders a bit of tilt. (Nothing too serious just enough to offset the perfect alignment just a tad) For the hips: The foot that is planted on the ground would shift the hip on that side up a bit, while the other side sagged down. For the shoulders: The shoulder above the planted leg and raised hip will be a bit lower than the other shoulder. I know you are probably super busy but if you have time to try and changes I think this would be interesting. I have attached a reference (more exaggerated than you will probably want.) to help you visualize my words if what I am typing is complete rubbish. Great work dude, very impressive.

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Pimpsy G. Professional Burger Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: McDonalds Posts: 2,564	Changed the lighting, didn't really have time to do that yet. Also here's another thing i finished a while ago but fixed up a bit for my portfolio

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KristenGW Registered User Join Date: Oct 2015 Posts: 921	I think the reason that the eyes bug people is that the rest of the figure has lots of shading (which looks great) but the eyes are just white with black dots, kind of making them seem plain. Sorry if that doesn't make sense

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Pimpsy G. Professional Burger Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: McDonalds Posts: 2,564	New version, made the lighting more dark and put some shadows on em