Posted by Springy

how does this look so far?

Pop tarts have sprinkles.

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/e8/1f/9a/e81f9a62acc8e530f8497de40d01d20a.jpg (Unsupported image host)


Also...

https://media.licdn.com/mpr/mpr/AAEAAQAAAAAAAAMXAAAAJDUyNDExYzQ4LWYyNDEtNDA4OS05YWIxLTlkZWZlYzkyYzZkZg.jpg (Unsupported image host)  

Posted by 4-Lom

Pop tarts have sprinkles.

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/e8/1f/9a/e81f9a62acc8e530f8497de40d01d20a.jpg (Unsupported image host)


Also...

https://media.licdn.com/mpr/mpr/AAEAAQAAAAAAAAMXAAAAJDUyNDExYzQ4LWYyNDEtNDA4OS05YWIxLTlkZWZlYzkyYzZkZg.jpg (Unsupported image host)

I'm aware, I just started -w-  

Posted by Springy

I'm aware, I just started -w-

I realized shortly after posting that it may come off as rude... I was kinda going for a joke about 'real women have curves' vs 'real pop tarts have sprinkles'

Cheers and good luck!  

Posted by Striken

Don't use a black outline for the pop tart, also have the top spread not be a square.

what do you mean by not be a square  

Sweet!  

So I worked on it a bit more but I'm not sure if the background seems a little bit to empty still, and I'm not to sure if I went to heavy on the shadow at the bottom of all the strokes to kind of make it seem like it pops out a bit more. All CC welcome, thanks.  

Posted by Coco

I would suggest trying to make the half heart more distinguishable on both of those. Like make the crack in the egg deeper so you can easily see that it's cracked in half, and doing something other than a recolor for the bomb (though I guess making it blink it ok...but i would still suggest something more distinguishable if possible).

sure

how is it looking  

Posted by Sun*

sure

how is it looking

looking good.. maybe make the (back) shell cracks lower?? for the sake of making it look more like a half heart.. :- ))  

Update. Took the stopper out of the 'used' ones... and inverted the "HEY LISTEN" message notification fairy wing colors.  

Someone should do a dinner plate and when its half heart all the food has been eaten off it.  

Posted by Basil

looking good.. maybe make the (back) shell cracks lower?? for the sake of making it look more like a half heart.. :- ))

Or maybe really deepen the shadows 'inside' the egg to make it dark and pronounced?  

Posted by 4-Lom

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Update. Took the stopper out of the 'used' ones... and inverted the "HEY LISTEN" message notification fairy wing colors.

Was thinking if you can make the half hearted one spill over  

Posted by Bryan*

Was thinking if you can make the half hearted one spill over

Would look cool, for sure... trying to picture the perspective on that makes me shudder thinking of the light sources while fitting it into frame


My inspiration was the "Elixer Soup" from Legend of Zelda Wind Waker... The 'two uses' of the soup, coupled with the traditional red colored health potion  

Posted by Sun*

sure

how is it looking

love this so much  

Posted by Lego

So I worked on it a bit more but I'm not sure if the background seems a little bit to empty still, and I'm not to sure if I went to heavy on the shadow at the bottom of all the strokes to kind of make it seem like it pops out a bit more. All CC welcome, thanks.

It's pretty pillow-shaded and looks blurry. You tried to do AA, but you made it very jaggied in the inside. Yes, it's too heavy.