Iv'e re-shaded my gfx work. Please any comments to fix them will be appreciated.  

Your stuff looks flat right now, try to give them some depth.  

Vurry nice.  

Looks great but mabey use darker colors? :O

And the palm tree kinda looks weird.  

Posted by Dylan

Your stuff look flat right now, try to give them some depth.

Alright thanks , will do.

Poetic- Thanks <3

Fsh- I was thinking that too , thanks !  

remember dont gradient shade  

I love the tree, nothing that would have fit Era or something like that.. it just looks wonderful in my eyes.  

Pencil is too short. if u want to make it as a trash pick it should be longer  

Posted by Yogy*

Pencil is too short. if u want to make it as a trash pick it should be longer

He didn't say he wanted to make it a trash pick...  

Posted by Yogy*

Pencil is too short. if u want to make it as a trash pick it should be longer

I love how you're jelly that people like his graphics so you act as if you are amazing and experienced.

It's fine weird, its really nice! just make it more 3d ;)

Oh and the length is actually good.  

Y u no make eraser?  

Suitcase is definately too boxy  

try making the outline of the pencil dark blue  

Here's an edit of your pencil, you don't need to use a ton of colors to add depth. My version only uses three.
 

i oike the rule!

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