My Random Shop of Randomness

MSM · 08-21-2012

Hey everyone. Here is a random shop I made a month or two ago, and I never had the chance to post it. So, here it is, my random shop of randomness. As usual, feel free to give criticism or say how you think it is. Thanks.

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Talon · 08-21-2012

Ah, I thought it was going to be an actual trading post-type thing with stuff you wanted to trade with other members. If you're looking for level advice, it should probably go in Creative Corner.

MementoJoker · 08-21-2012

Off topic: Creative corner
On topic: 5/10, mediocre.

MSM · 08-21-2012

Well it wasn't off topic... this level was meant for iEra...

Gamelova · 08-21-2012

Spread out the bottom table. It'll be hard for iPod/iPhone players to see what's on it.

MSM · 08-21-2012

Hmm ok, ill work on it

Ok, well i edited the level, I made the table not as tall, but a bit longer, for the length across:

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callimuc · 08-22-2012

Posted by MSM

Well it wasn't off topic... this level was meant for iEra...

still cc

and im missing something in the level.. but cant say what.

MSM · 08-22-2012

Posted by callimuc

still cc

and im missing something in the level.. but cant say what.

Maybe its the items that would be sold at this shop.

fsh · 08-23-2012

Add a window its too dark x-x and btw that giant table isn't very good.. I have ipod and I would'nt be able to click items

iSilver · 08-23-2012

only problem is there is nothing to sale
stop trying so hard to be a lat for era

fsh · 08-23-2012

Posted by iSilver

only problem is there is nothing to sale
stop trying so hard to be a lat for era

I wanna rep you bad but I have to wait 24 hours D:!

callimuc · 08-23-2012

Posted by MSM

Maybe its the items that would be sold at this shop.

no, its the shape of the level. its just a square. also you have stairs going up but yet there is no difference in the height of the walls

Dude1310 · 08-23-2012

Posted by callimuc

no, its the shape of the level. its just a square. also you have stairs going up but yet there is no difference in the height of the walls

No. The wall height should be the same and he has it the same.

callimuc · 08-23-2012

it shouldnt be the same. either the top one should be smaller or the bottom one taller except your house is like
http://www.schliessfaecher.de/kaufen/media/images/schraegdach.jpg (Unsupported image host)

Imprint · 08-23-2012

Level looks pretty messy. The Floor tiling looks like you placed it randomly and the tables don't seem to have any connection to each other. Other then that, it's just the perspective of the walls that's off around the staircase.

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MSM GraalOnline Era PR Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: NY, United States Posts: 3,131	My Random Shop of Randomness Hey everyone. Here is a random shop I made a month or two ago, and I never had the chance to post it. So, here it is, my random shop of randomness. As usual, feel free to give criticism or say how you think it is. Thanks.

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Talon don't call it a comeback Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 8,268	Ah, I thought it was going to be an actual trading post-type thing with stuff you wanted to trade with other members. If you're looking for level advice, it should probably go in Creative Corner.

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MementoJoker Registered User Join Date: May 2012 Location: Egypt Posts: 2,939	Off topic: Creative corner On topic: 5/10, mediocre.

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Gamelova iEra's #1 Asian Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 620	Spread out the bottom table. It'll be hard for iPod/iPhone players to see what's on it.

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fsh floating on Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: GraalOnline Zone Posts: 3,422	Add a window its too dark x-x and btw that giant table isn't very good.. I have ipod and I would'nt be able to click items

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iSilver 454234 Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: michigan usa Posts: 640	only problem is there is nothing to sale stop trying so hard to be a lat for era

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callimuc Registered User Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Germany Posts: 6,122	it shouldnt be the same. either the top one should be smaller or the bottom one taller except your house is like http://www.schliessfaecher.de/kaufen/media/images/schraegdach.jpg (Unsupported image host)

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Imprint Registered User Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Chicago, IL Posts: 1,992	Level looks pretty messy. The Floor tiling looks like you placed it randomly and the tables don't seem to have any connection to each other. Other then that, it's just the perspective of the walls that's off around the staircase.