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Well if anything, I'll be happy to give you a tip or two on improving First is the colors. According to Dylan's research, there was a total of 32 colors. Since this is more of an iEra skateboard feel, tone down the wood, yellow, and blue colors to about 3-5 each: the minimum must be 3 (darker color, normal color, lighter color). Since the lighting on the board is focused on the middle, you did a good job at coloring but your colors need to be more vivid. These colors feel entirely plain The same applies to the back of the board aswell. Second is detail.. It looks plain. I recommend maybe giving the wheel more of a plastic-like texture (I think that's how it's called) instead of leaving it one color. Also, give some sort of a wood texture to the back of the board Just my suggestions. If you wish to avoid them, feel free to but you could find these suggestions of mine really useful if you're asking for critique |
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GraalOnline Era PR
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Okie
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I wish i wish i wish we had neg rep, i'd be dealing some out...
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GraalOnline Era PR
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Ehem...
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GraalOnline Era PR
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Nothing, just nothing
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Love to all
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Removed a lot of spam! Stay on topic please.
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Thanks Yephenpeace. Anywho, MSM. Try not to use a lot of colors that are almost the same exact color. The only part of the skateboard that looks shaded is the part that is down, where it gets slightly darker. You need to remember shading techniques, and what the texture of different things are. |
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Who knows?
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Ok. And I didn't use 33 colors... i used maybe 20 at the most.
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But it doesnt... lolololol
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