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04-10-2012
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Cigam
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RileyFiery
Cannon: The shading isn't showing the image's shape that well. It feels flat to me. (Assuming it's a cylindrical shape.)
Tomato: It doesn't feel like a tomato. Try to darken the bright shade and possibly give the perfect circle some defects.
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/8/88/Bright_red_tomato_and_cross_section02.jpg/250px-Bright_red_tomato_and_cross_section02.jpg
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Ok thanks. Since your suggesting to touch up pretty much everything, it's gonna be a little hard to edit. Might just make a new launcher or make a new version. Thanks for the feedback and tips though!
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