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yeah the last one is what looks best imo. try and do a similar colourful version of the first two. the rough handrawn / sketch style looks cool. kinda resembles some of golf wang and illegal civilization's clothing
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i was going for a golf(golfwang the brand not the sport) type of style with the eyes because i really like tyler the creator and thanks for the feedback, will try to do a simpler version of the first two
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My friend is actually a graphic designer so I will try to give CC based off things I've seen from him (I can get his opinion too if you like). From what I can tell from your logo, it is super super simplistic, which is not a bad thing at all, but, you are using a "default font". It kind of takes away from the logo, looks bland/unprofessional. Try to make your own font/drawing out the letters yourself! It'll give your logo more of an identity. Maybe have the letters flow into the circle that encaspules it, just an idea. Make a bunch of different versions even if they have small little changes between them. My friend has at least 10-13 different versions of the same logo/design on one illustrator page. I actually really like the 3rd shirt for the reasons others have pointed out already! Good luck!
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Thank you and will do
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I liked the eye. I'd cop it.
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thanks
and i was thinking about either embroidering it on the front and just that or maybe screen printing it on the front then maybe it bigger on the bag, just some ideas though
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No one is going to buy the first two, a weird low resolution logo that has no cool look or design to it plastered on a plain shirt is a horrible idea IMO.
The last one I can see people possibly buying, and you should stick with designs like that.
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Ok and thanks
i just thought of a new shirt idea and have produced a few images of what i had in mind, a few different ideas, could change the font and pictures but the image of these shirts would be cheaters always win and have pictures of iconic sports players that have cheated before like barry bonds, alex rodriguez, and tiger woods (on his wife) lol. but i have sketched up a few ideas and please give some feedback on anything.
front and back image:
http://imgur.com/a/JLRUV
text on front image on back:
http://imgur.com/a/baHC0
blank back image and text on front:
http://imgur.com/a/pNUOs
those are the 3 ideas i have mocked up and whatevers on there would be the only things on there so like for the last one the back would be blank
please give cc