I have been sketching up designs on my notepad for the past few weeks for a clothing brand (Streetwear in more particular) and today decided to put a few of them into ai and make them on the computer, these are what i came up with, i wanted some feedback and have posted them on reddit but wanted some feedback before i print them onto tee shirts
what are your guys feedback?? 
LINK: http://imgur.com/a/B1xXA
Will take any CC so feel free to say your opinion  |
My friend is actually a graphic designer so I will try to give CC based off things I've seen from him (I can get his opinion too if you like). From what I can tell from your logo, it is super super simplistic, which is not a bad thing at all, but, you are using a "default font". It kind of takes away from the logo, looks bland/unprofessional. Try to make your own font/drawing out the letters yourself! It'll give your logo more of an identity. Maybe have the letters flow into the circle that encaspules it, just an idea. Make a bunch of different versions even if they have small little changes between them. My friend has at least 10-13 different versions of the same logo/design on one illustrator page. I actually really like the 3rd shirt for the reasons others have pointed out already! Good luck!
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