So I worked on it a bit more but I'm not sure if the background seems a little bit to empty still, and I'm not to sure if I went to heavy on the shadow at the bottom of all the strokes to kind of make it seem like it pops out a bit more. All CC welcome, thanks. |
It's pretty pillow-shaded and looks blurry. You tried to do AA, but you made it very jaggied in the inside. Yes, it's too heavy.