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I like it! The only thing I would say you might want to think about is having him think the last paragraph or so of dialogue, seeing as he has a knife lodged into his ribs. (Might be hard to speak as much) Or you could have him stuttering/murmuring.
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The last paragraph is him reminiscing aka reliving the past. It isn't during his current position.
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Yeah, the last paragraph definitely needs some revising, but I like the emotion the story emits. I love how the dialogue sounds, but some of the narrative sentences need rewording or restructuring.
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If you're talking about after he said "I begin to reminisce" all after is him reliving the past. Apparently I didn't word it right to the point where people recognize that it is the past. I don't want people to get confused.
Any tips on what to reword/restructure?