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UPDATE:
Thanks for all the help! I think i'm gonna change a lot of the plot and add make it a little more interesting.
hey so I am entering a one act play contest and I have an idea for what I want to write.
My idea is a story about a women who has this crush on this guy and the first scene starts in kindergarden, then the next is the begning of middle school, etc. the idea is she is inlove with this boy and as time goes on she gets more love for him, but the odds of him liking her back become less and less. Finally as the senior ball gets closer she builds up the gut to ask him out but she is turned down and runs away before he can explain his reasoning. She goes home and goes into depression.
Now heres where I need help. How do I end this? I had the idea of her commiting scuicide and then the last scene is a scene of her crush at her grave telling her he said no because he promised to bring his best friend to the dance, and how he wanted to bring her because he had the biggest crush on her since
Or is this to deep and sad?!?!?! I want this play to be very realstic, and funny, but still has a serious and awkward vibe around it
Any ideas how to end this, or ideas for the play?
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I like the whole idea up until she goes home with depression and such, sooo I have my own input although it's kinda eh.
So, instead of rejecting her at first, he accepts her invite. Night of the dance arrives, she's dressed in a pitch black, sparkling dress. She arrives by herself only to see him there with another girl and she kisses him. (The kiss between the two was unintentional on the guys part.) She storms out sobbing and runs through the streets until
she's hit by a car who hadn't seen her.
She's in a coma for a month and awoke to his tears falling on her face, but she couldn't move to console him. The doctor arrives and informs her that she had been paralyzed from the waist down and may never walk again.
He stays with her through her months of therapy, she stays motivated and would always repeat to herself, "I'll walk."
Eventually he proposes to her, and the day of the wedding arrives. She had always dreamt her father would walk her down the isle. She looks up at her father from her wheelchair, tears welling up in her eyes and says, " I'll walk"
All this but more in depth, mine was kinda made up on the spot. Hope I maybe helped idk