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Wtf, the ending is dumb af.
Might as well read this off to them instead of making a full blown play out of it.
Listen, if you think having the end be the two getting together is too cliche then you aren't wrong.
But just straight up saying "Oh well, she didn't find true love and went home and killed herself." is waaaaaaaaay worse.
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yeah I see your point. Idk just thoughts. I still have 3 months to write it just spilling ideas out