Posted by TWIZ

Tbh hers looks a lot more like fin. Assuming you haven't watched the latest Star Wars film (you never referred to his name), you probably haven't seen Finn in all around views of his head/body, which probably also influenced her interpretation. Her angle seems slightly different from the image, which is aiming downward, rather than upward as in the image, which also influenced her drawing in that she was able to include angles and lines different from the image.

I see she went for more of a softer, simplistic if you will, interpretation. I wouldn't stress the smallest details too much, but Asaiki was right about paying attention to lines, especially on top. I honestly would have only said something about the nose shape, it seems too flat compared to Finn's.