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Pazx · 03-14-2013

Hello becca I did a thing called proof-reading, I would recommend it along with the use of proper grammar.

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(btw its 3am excuse the grammatical errors because i know ther'eresrerser a few)

also for the love of jesus christ himself dont you dare write another nya or i will cut your catgirl's ears tail and tongue off and feed them to my dog

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Pazx amateur gay Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Australia Posts: 3,372	Hello becca I did a thing called proof-reading, I would recommend it along with the use of proper grammar. Spoiler "Ikuto-Nyaa, Ikuto-Nyaa! You gotta get up" Yoru exclaimed "Shut up Yoru, I'm trying to sleep" "Ikuto! Nya, I'm gonna get Utau if you don't get up!" "Whatever," Ikuto mumbled as he rolled over. "Get Utau... Utau!" He stammers as he sits up, "Okay, I'm up!" "That's more like it" Yoru mewed anxiously. "We should get out of here before Utau comes and gets us." As Ikuto dressed, Yoru sat in anticipation of the surprise they had planned for their friends before the two leapt out of the window. (btw its 3am excuse the grammatical errors because i know ther'eresrerser a few) also for the love of jesus christ himself dont you dare write another nya or i will cut your catgirl's ears tail and tongue off and feed them to my dog