Hello Nituco. Your graphic is very tiny, so there is little for me to work with/edit. However, given the space I introduced two things.
Shades: You had only one shade per color, this makes the image look bland and boring.
Outline: Your outline was very jagged and hard to follow, most lollipops are very circular.
Hopefully you can see the difference between the two. Keep practicing!
This is a hat I made for the hat competition on Izone, but I didn't really like how it looked too big for the head.. Any critiques would help a lot  Also theirs a head I made for fun and was trying to go with the white shading look, but it didn't really work out... Thanks |
To be honest, I really liked your hood, it was one of the few graphics I had picked out. The only thing I would change would be the gold trim to seem less gradient, also making hoods on Graal is hard because of the fact it does not go with every head and body. I still liked it overall so GJ.
Did a quick edit of your helmet too Ryan.
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Love the edit, nice work furry.