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iHot · 01-04-2013

Describe the battle. I'm a **** writer but it needs to be addressed.
Example:
The Graal Army fought valiantly against the foreign machines. The fireballs and magic of the Classic Graalians engulfed the battlefield in flames and a thick heavy smoke. The knights swords proved to have no effect on the well built monsters and the Umbrellas, daggers and guns of the people of Era were destroyed. The monsters shot their lasers faster than the Classic Mages. Their machine guns piercing the poor Graalians. The cries of men and woman...men and woman that would never return to their homes...their families. Among them a child named (insert name here) had just seen his/her family slaughtered by the evil machines.
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iHot Graalian Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Belle Isle Posts: 4,481	Describe the battle. I'm a **** writer but it needs to be addressed. Example: The Graal Army fought valiantly against the foreign machines. The fireballs and magic of the Classic Graalians engulfed the battlefield in flames and a thick heavy smoke. The knights swords proved to have no effect on the well built monsters and the Umbrellas, daggers and guns of the people of Era were destroyed. The monsters shot their lasers faster than the Classic Mages. Their machine guns piercing the poor Graalians. The cries of men and woman...men and woman that would never return to their homes...their families. Among them a child named (insert name here) had just seen his/her family slaughtered by the evil machines. INTRO FOR MAIN CHARACTER Last edited by iHot; 01-04-2013 at 03:03 AM.