The positions of the chairs are simply wrong, it would go better in another placement tho.
Check my level below by my meaning of "lighting the rugs". Some of you might not like but that's another style, the script can be easily made in gs1, it's light4.png using drawaslight and seteffect with a low opacity, if you'd like to spice it up add some random() to the alpha or color, but that's better if it was in gs2.
Other than that, I like the way you work with the placement of objects, and your potential.
Good luck helping the community!