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Cigam 02-20-2012 05:54 AM

Feedback Please!
 
http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...nja-Helmet.png
http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...s-AFK-Mask.png
http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...llax-Combo.png
http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...-Top-Hat-2.png
Feedback on my hats please :D

Ace 02-20-2012 06:04 AM

The afk mask is nice

LordBryson 02-20-2012 06:46 AM

Good start the ninja mask needs more shading and the top hat is to skinny

Cigam 02-20-2012 02:20 PM

Quote:

Posted by LordBryson (Post 69994)
Good start the ninja mask needs more shading and the top hat is to skinny

Kk thanks ill touch up the helmet. I might change the top hat too but not now.

BroozeB 02-20-2012 04:17 PM

Seems like you're doing huge shapes and trying to shade them with the gradient tool. Focus on doing more pixel-pixel work rather than just drawing a huge vague shape and calling it a ninja helmet. You did this more with the AFK mask but it lacks texture and shading near vital areas.
I have never liked hats similar to Chillax Combo and therefore I have nothing to say about it, but the Top Hat is nice.

MrSimons 02-20-2012 05:03 PM

They are all nice except the ninja helmet, the shading is honestly awful... other than that they all are ok...

Maikeru 02-20-2012 05:19 PM

I don't mind the shape of the hats but you need to improve the shading by a whole lot. never use gradient as a shading tool unless you're going to pixelate/dither/edit those colors correctly

Cigam 02-21-2012 12:35 AM

Kk thanks for the feedback guys, ill hopfully touch them up correctly to fit all you're likes ;)

Hermes* 02-21-2012 03:43 PM

good but i think they need some shading ;)

Cigam 02-21-2012 10:45 PM

http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...e/rnh-1or2.png New Version or Old Version? (New: first one Old: Second one)

Dylan 02-22-2012 05:13 AM

Quote:

Posted by Cigam (Post 70876)
http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...e/rnh-1or2.png New Version or Old Version? (New: first one Old: Second one)

Neither.

Hermes* 02-22-2012 05:18 AM

Quote:

Posted by Bam (Post 71089)
Neither.

haha xD

BEH0LD iTz SAM 02-22-2012 06:25 AM

I dont like the yellow dots Dx mabye try more dark colours for a ninja mask, notice my ninja head in my status and the body are dark colours, black, charcoal, grey and dark blue, instead of fluro green with some yellow

Cigam 02-22-2012 12:26 PM

Kk thanks i'll touch it up again xD

Cigam 02-26-2012 08:45 PM

http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...-alien-cap.png Feedback please ^.^


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