PacMan Poem
 

This is a poem I wrote about Graalonline Classic.. It's a bit of a rough draft, but wanted to share. I hope you guys like:

To Stop PacMan they put him in a cage/
They treat him like a sacman, cuz they dont like the way he plays/
Pacman the great, pacman the brave/
He was sent to Graal to put the enemies in a grave/
Join Noob Killerz if you feel that you're worthy/
Join Noob Killerz cuz you never beg for mercy/

can you stop spamming already..colin will not be happy :( you're threads will mysteriously disappear again and you'll be left Begging for mercy

That's very rude of you to call my poem spam. I would never disrespect your poem like that. I spent a lot of time writing this poem, and I would appreciate it if you showed me a little respect, as I always show u respect.

This poem surpasses every other famous poem to ever exist on earth.

Thank you Wolfie, I appreciate the feedback. You are a true friend.

lol xD! PACMAN FOR PRESIDENT! I like youre poem xD

Thank you! I was in a coffee shop called Starbucks drinking a soy double shot carmel mocchiatto with extra carmel and whip cream, when I was inspired to write it.

Dude that was beautiful.

If you keep up with these kinds of work, you can be the next William Shakespears

THank you my friend!
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That moment you want to sound cool.... "Soy double shot caramel mocchiatto with extra caramel and whip cream" Lol, im joking pac xD

The structure of the poem is good, and it flows well. This is a great constructed poem, just write about something better next time xD

there was once a young lad named pac
he believed that he had a big.... mac
he would try to rhyme, with words what a crime
this is starting to be on the dime...

his enemies are anyone who defy
their superiority he will deny
so think twice before, causing a flame war
with pacman the "master of rhyme"

I'm just joking though, was bored :)

My turn!

Pacman the kewl dood
drinks milk and eats food
When he wants to pee he drools
Trying his best to keep his kewl

Pisses on BD cakes for the love of god
got a blowing stick from a dood called Tod
PKs everyday seamlessly at Mod
Calls his little finger Cod (fish)

Pacman the kawaii dood,pacman the kawaii dood

/('.')/ hands in the air!

Pacman is obese
Pacman is a beast
I suck at poetry
and i dont wanna retry.

because i am bored
**** it

Wakakakakakaakaka
wakaka wakaka
waka waka wak wak
wakakaka wakaka
wak

I beat all of you sorry guys my rhymes are literally fire.
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