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Blissful ignorance (A short poem)

My parents are too materialistic
My siblings are too clumsy and wrong.
My friends are just some selfish pricks,
that want to hit a bong.

My teachers are too self-richeous,
The principle, head of them all,
The police are just enforcing piss,
and the politicians like to stall.

The teenagers are dangerous drivers,
who party all night long.
The adults are all nerdy wheezers,
and asians are great at ping-pong.

Geeks play too much video games,
Jocks hurt all the girls.
The girls who have the prettiest names,
and with the natural curls.

Freshmen are all immature runts,
Seniors look too old.
Sophomores have a learning curve,
Juniors are the bold.

Religion is too overwhelming,
atheism, too cold.
Agnosticism is too complicated,
All of this is too old.

Musicians are too confident,
Actors are all too fake.
Artists are all confusing,
and a writers job is a piece of cake.

Girlfriends are too demanding,
boyfriends are too dumb.
Mary won't be reprimanding,
and Lucy will make you numb.

Democrats are too forgiving,
and republicans are too strict
Presidents are too persuading,
and his cabinet needs to be kicked.

Facebook is too demanding,
myspace is but a joke.
Twitter is for celebrity freaks,
and Tumblr, like a girl's dose of coke.

People are too misunderstood,
This is just but my 'two cents,
People will always judge too much,
based off their own ignorance.

~Blissful ignorance

Please criticize as much as you can. Thank you. Or any ideas to add to my poem would be great too .

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Posted by God (Post 438728)

My parents are too materialistic
My siblings are too clumsy and wrong. Aren't all?
My friends are just some selfish pricks, ^^^
that want to hit a bong.

My teachers are too self-richeous, *****s
The principle, head of them all, head-*****
The police are just enforcing piss, those piss enforcers
and the politicians like to stall. No duh

The teenagers are dangerous drivers,
who party all night long. Cuz #yolo
The adults are all nerdy wheezers, it's the factories fault
and asians are great at ping-pong. Seriously, what's their secret?

Geeks play too much video games, you will get flack from this
Jocks hurt all the girls. Assholes.
The girls who have the prettiest names, too many pretty names
and with the natural curls. <3

Freshmen are all immature runts, garublednan?
Seniors look too old. They need cream.
Sophomores have a learning curve, perhaps...
Juniors are the bold. Too bold

Religion is too overwhelming, very
atheism, too cold. Like redheads
Agnosticism is too complicated, wat.
All of this is too old. Liek ur mum

Musicians are too confident, like juniors
Actors are all too fake. You don't say?
Artists are all confusing, "abstract"
and a writers job is a piece of cake. I can wriet huehuehue

Girlfriends are too demanding, bitches
boyfriends are too dumb. Assholes
Mary won't be reprimanding, who?
and Lucy will make you numb. And who?

Democrats are too forgiving, ;-; srry
and republicans are too strict. NO! :C
Presidents are too persuading, to the dumb****s, yeah
and his cabinet needs to be kicked. O.o

Facebook is too demanding, wat is a "Facebook"?
myspace is but a joke. But I like my space :(
Twitter is for celebrity freaks, to be fair, celebrities are birdbrained
and Tumblr, like a girl's dose of coke. Yum?

People are too misunderstood, ****, I'm nt taking time to understand someone.

This is just but my 'two cents, ur poor lolz
People will always judge too much, I smell hypocrite!
based off their own ignorance.

~Blissful ignorance

Please criticize as much as you can. Thank you. Or any ideas to add to my poem would be great too .

Just kidding, good poem.

i like the part about lucy

I have to spread rep.

Quote:

Posted by God (Post 438728)

and Tumblr, like a girl's dose of coke.

This was my favorite line. Creative and true.

Hey guys, not trying to make an unnecessary bump, but I wanted to say I really appreciate the feedback. Thank you <3

Quote:

Posted by HON3Y BADG3R (Post 443506)

Song pls?

Ill see what I can do :D

God, thats nice :D i see what u did at the end there ;)