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Lueegy 06-29-2013 03:12 AM

Lueegy's GFX :D
 
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some of my gfx i made this year hope to hear any tips on how i can improve

GOAT 06-29-2013 03:27 AM

I don't have any tips but I like the first hat. looks good

Lueegy 06-29-2013 04:11 AM

Thanks

Lueegy 06-29-2013 07:16 AM

Any pointers or things I need to improve?

Myst 06-29-2013 08:07 AM

your shading is ugly

Lueegy 06-29-2013 11:59 PM

3: i tried my best

kenthefruit 06-30-2013 12:04 AM

Use dark outlining.

Emera 06-30-2013 12:11 AM

Quote:

Posted by Myst (Post 378526)
your shading is ugly

Sick to death of ass holes like you posting on creative corner threads with short statements like this that a) don't help the OP improve in any way and b) make you look like an ass hole. If your criticism isn't constructive and/or won't help the OP improve, then just don't ****ing post, OK?

TNR 06-30-2013 12:52 AM

You need to work on your shading. First read some tutorials, learn all the terms. And keep practicing.

Here are some that helped me a lot:

1. http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/foru...s.asp?TID=5692
2. http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/foru....asp?TID=11299
3. http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/

wildkeldeo 06-30-2013 01:10 AM

That's some pretty good gfx. Try to improve a tad bit in your shading. Overall, that's some great talented art! :3

Platinum 06-30-2013 02:16 AM

Tree hat looks a bit plain. Also remember textures - metal and fabric should have different shading. And your shading isn't that smooth.
Nice outlines.

Shadow King 06-30-2013 03:24 AM

Nice

Lueegy 06-30-2013 05:20 AM

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hat im currently working on any tips?

Alex Damian 06-30-2013 06:08 AM

Pretty good :)

Platinum 06-30-2013 06:41 AM

Quote:

Posted by Lueegy (Post 379086)
hat im currently working on any tips?

Work on your shading. Have a determined light source. I prefer using the upper left. Idk why.
But ALWAYS have a light source and keep it there. There are many hats I've seen without a consistent light source, which keeps changing (example: 2013 fireworks hat)

I also have noticed you have the same problem with the ones at the top. Try drawing a sun at the top left of each square or something.

Example using your work: For the top left hat, when facing up the light is in the middle. For the facing left one, the light is coming from the right.


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