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princess becca 05-01-2013 02:34 PM

poetry with feeling
 
this is a poem i found

jack be nimble
jack be quick
jack forgot to check if the ice was thick

emma was still
emma was late
emmas brother is now part of the lake

time has passed
time has gone
time has brought jack back wrong

he was solemn
he was brave
he left his coat on emmas grave

emma was sad
emma was scared
but she knew inside that jack really cared

jack was lost
jack had forgot
that he had a little story before the plot

jack has wondered
jack had fought
jack remembered what he had forgot

jack be fearless
jack be bold
jack drowned protecting someone he cared for -jack frost

i changed it a little

if you have any poems that you wrote or like post em'

Tyler 05-01-2013 03:43 PM

I have touched the hearts of millions with this one.


Refrigerator Haiku


Refrigerator
It has food that you can eat
Refrigerator

Talon 05-01-2013 03:45 PM

Quote:

Posted by Tyler (Post 342215)
I have touched the hearts of millions with this one.


Refrigerator Haiku


Refrigerator
It has food that you can eat
Refrigerator

GG

princess becca 05-01-2013 03:48 PM

nice

nigel 05-01-2013 03:52 PM

that was a great one man. good job!

princess becca 05-01-2013 03:58 PM

sha

Sup3rn00b 05-01-2013 04:03 PM

Quote:

Posted by Tyler (Post 342215)
I have touched the hearts of millions with this one.


Refrigerator Haiku


Refrigerator
It has food that you can eat
Refrigerator

I shed a tear.

Von 05-01-2013 04:39 PM

My ode to SuperNoob.

Supernoob
He is a noob
super
wow!
Supernoob


:'(

Xavier 05-01-2013 05:18 PM

I haiku I borrowed from a friend. Waking up for school/work on Monday:

no no no no no
no no no no no no no
no no no no no

hosler 05-01-2013 06:53 PM

The frog and the hog sat on a log.
The hog was fat. The frog was flat
After the hog sat on the frog.

Blueh 05-01-2013 08:26 PM

Roses are grey,
Violets are grey,
S*** I'm colorblind.

princess becca 05-01-2013 08:44 PM

star light star bright the first star i see tonight i wish i may i wish i might oh crap its a satalight

Talon 05-01-2013 09:35 PM

Quote:

Posted by hosler (Post 342280)
The frog and the hog sat on a log.
The hog was fat. The frog was flat
After the hog sat on the frog.

my sides

eric 05-01-2013 10:23 PM

In orphanages theres lots of beds
Princess Becca makes too many threads

The end

MementoJoker 05-01-2013 10:27 PM

Poetry by Gary.


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