'Graal Zone' by Nezo - Part 1
This is a player made up story about the making of Graal Zone, and put it lots of time writing it. Hope you enjoy it :) Rep, Rate and Comment!
It was the year 2055, machines once created by Graalians switched sides and started to destroy the beautiful world of Graal.
The machines with their advanced intelligence, they built weapons and planned their invasion in great detail. Back in 2040, these machines survey the world of Graal and knew that Graalians were weak, armed only with swords and guns they knew that have no chance of fighting back the machines.
Then came the night of a falling star. It flashed across the sky just before dawn- a line of greenish light! Some heard hissing sound as it fell.
Soon after dawn, around the fields of the town ' Classic ' there was a large enormous crater. It seems like a large object had made the hole. Sand and gravel had been scattered with every direction. The bushed were on fire, tree were fallen and the ground was so burned black as far as you could see.
It was laying in the ground, it was hot. On its metal it said ' Made in Era '
Everyone was surprised! This object or whatever is from our world of Graal!
Suddenly, out of the blue the object transformed into a machine taller than a house. It was walking! It is alive!!!
People of Graal watched in amazement, suddenly 2 more machines fell on to the town.
In a matter of seconds soldiers of every Graal town came.
The guns from Era, the magic and swords from Classic. The Graal Army formed a circle around the 3 machines. People started to run knowing there would be a huge battle!
Suddenly, the machines started to fire lasers, heat- rays and missiles to the Army! The Army returned the attack! Soon there was a huge epic battle!
6 hours passed, people saw the work of the machines, piles of rubble sat where buildings once stood. Streets were empty except for the people scurrying from hiding place to hiding place, it was hard to imagine that this was the peaceful world that Graalians lived in for many years.
The people of Graal began to wonder about the giant machines. Why are they from Graal? Why are they so powerful? Why are we going to do now?!
THE END OF PART 1
This is the end of part 1, I took around 3 hours writing this. Trying to find better words and phrase for this story. I would end my part 1 here as I don't know if people is going to like it or not. Please let me know if I should continue or if I should stop writing.
If there is any better words or wrong Grammer that I used, feel free to tell me via the comments section. See you guys soon! Peace out!
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