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flaw* 10-19-2012 11:46 PM

Front Lawn by Flaw*
 
This is just a house and a front lawn im making. NOTE: THIS IS NOT FINISHED. IM STILL WORKING ON IT I need some Constructive Critiscm because i just started GFX'in and i need some tips. Also I will post the finished image on this thread soon. Thanks!



[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/xlIrV.gif[/IMG]

Dylan 10-19-2012 11:49 PM

Spray paint tool on the grass?

flaw* 10-19-2012 11:50 PM

Ya lol didnt turn out too great...

LavaClaw 10-19-2012 11:52 PM

Instead of doing it all freehand, you might want to make some tiles.

MSM 10-20-2012 03:27 AM

Use Google SketchUp, its a nice program I use to design watch concepts in 3D for a company

Jester Lapse 10-20-2012 03:57 AM

start small...you are rushing

The Doctor 10-20-2012 04:26 AM

Quote:

Posted by Jester Lapse (Post 217024)
start small...you are rushing

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/8...0703528680.jpg

flaw* 10-20-2012 06:46 PM

Thanks guys! It really helps!

Zerith 10-21-2012 12:55 AM

Quote:

Posted by flaw* (Post 216886)
This is just a house and a front lawn im making. NOTE: THIS IS NOT FINISHED. IM STILL WORKING ON IT I need some Constructive Critiscm because i just started GFX'in and i need some tips. Also I will post the finished image on this thread soon. Thanks!



[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/xlIrV.gif[/IMG]

This is really good. A lot of people have a hard time grasping the concept of perspective and you successfully showed perspective and made the object stand out correctly. The only thing that conflicts against that is the wooden cross supports underneath the stand that do not compliment the perspective taken at all. This is a good step forward!

Talon 10-21-2012 08:28 AM

As a general rule of thumb, try to stray away from preset brush tools when creating pixel art. Shading will also make it look a ton nicer, and the perspective seems about right. The crossed wood under the porch is inconsistent, however; might wanna patch that up.


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