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Katniss 09-05-2011 01:10 AM
Like my Poem?
 
I wrote this

Take me somewhere
By Kat
Take me somewhere,
Far from home.
Take me somewhere,
Away from friend or foe.
Take me somewhere,
I want to be.
Where all things love and no things see.

Critique? Comments?

Tricxta 09-05-2011 01:13 AM
Story of an emo lol? Who wants to be away from friends? :(

It flows quite nicely though so well done with that! :)

Rufus 09-05-2011 01:15 AM
Nice poem, I like it.

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Posted by Tricxta (Post 4974)
Story of an emo lol? Who wants to be away from friends? :(
Friends can be just as stressful as enemies :P

Katniss 09-05-2011 01:15 AM
Quote:
Posted by Tricxta (Post 4974)
Story of an emo lol? Who wants to be away from friends? :(

It flows quite nicely though so well done with that! :)
It's supposed to be like, they just want to start clean. And what Rufus said.
But thank you :)

BroozeB 09-05-2011 01:35 AM
I like all poetry because I can't write that ****.

Winter 09-05-2011 01:52 AM
As a lover of poetry and a feeler of emotions, I can relate to this poem as well as read it with an open heart, taking in what it means and receiving that fulfilling feeling of a unique knowledge.

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Posted by KatGoesRawr (Post 4969)
Where all things love and no things see.
This part confuses me. Explain?

Katniss 09-05-2011 01:55 AM
Quote:
Posted by Shannon (Post 5008)
As a lover of poetry and a feeler of emotions, I can relate to this poem as well as read it with an open heart, taking in what it means and receiving that fulfilling feeling of a unique knowledge.



This part confuses me. Explain?
Basically saying, no one judges by looks. Everyone loves each other for who they are.

Winter 09-05-2011 01:57 AM
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Posted by KatGoesRawr (Post 5013)
Basically saying, no one judges by looks. Everyone loves each other for who they are.
Ah, I was caught up in the literal meaning of the word see, as I was caught up in the literal meaning of the word love. Excellent poem, I would definitely love to read another one! ^_^

Katniss 09-05-2011 02:13 AM
Quote:
Posted by Shannon (Post 5014)
Ah, I was caught up in the literal meaning of the word see, as I was caught up in the literal meaning of the word love. Excellent poem, I would definitely love to read another one! ^_^
Thanks :)


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