I'm glad you like it! I was putting my face to the screen, and ended up finishing it, but I do like your suggestion. I was thinking the same initially that I should incorporate the shine of the eye more, but I ended up dulling the effect down. I'll try out what you said when I get around to looking at this again.

Here is the finished piece.

https://i.imgur.com/eUldKKw.png

This, Is awesome looking.