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Lueegy 06-29-2013 03:12 AM

Lueegy's GFX :D
 
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some of my gfx i made this year hope to hear any tips on how i can improve

GOAT 06-29-2013 03:27 AM

I don't have any tips but I like the first hat. looks good

Lueegy 06-29-2013 04:11 AM

Thanks

Lueegy 06-29-2013 07:16 AM

Any pointers or things I need to improve?

Myst 06-29-2013 08:07 AM

your shading is ugly

Lueegy 06-29-2013 11:59 PM

3: i tried my best

kenthefruit 06-30-2013 12:04 AM

Use dark outlining.

Emera 06-30-2013 12:11 AM

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Posted by Myst (Post 378526)
your shading is ugly

Sick to death of ass holes like you posting on creative corner threads with short statements like this that a) don't help the OP improve in any way and b) make you look like an ass hole. If your criticism isn't constructive and/or won't help the OP improve, then just don't ****ing post, OK?

TNR 06-30-2013 12:52 AM

You need to work on your shading. First read some tutorials, learn all the terms. And keep practicing.

Here are some that helped me a lot:

1. http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/foru...s.asp?TID=5692
2. http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/foru....asp?TID=11299
3. http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/

wildkeldeo 06-30-2013 01:10 AM

That's some pretty good gfx. Try to improve a tad bit in your shading. Overall, that's some great talented art! :3

Platinum 06-30-2013 02:16 AM

Tree hat looks a bit plain. Also remember textures - metal and fabric should have different shading. And your shading isn't that smooth.
Nice outlines.

Shadow King 06-30-2013 03:24 AM

Nice

Lueegy 06-30-2013 05:20 AM

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hat im currently working on any tips?

Alex Damian 06-30-2013 06:08 AM

Pretty good :)

Platinum 06-30-2013 06:41 AM

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Posted by Lueegy (Post 379086)
hat im currently working on any tips?

Work on your shading. Have a determined light source. I prefer using the upper left. Idk why.
But ALWAYS have a light source and keep it there. There are many hats I've seen without a consistent light source, which keeps changing (example: 2013 fireworks hat)

I also have noticed you have the same problem with the ones at the top. Try drawing a sun at the top left of each square or something.

Example using your work: For the top left hat, when facing up the light is in the middle. For the facing left one, the light is coming from the right.

Lueegy 06-30-2013 08:01 AM

Mk I will try working on my shading and light source

Trakan 06-30-2013 05:31 PM

Damn Mortal Kombat and Naruto Hokage are my favorite

Lueegy 06-30-2013 06:44 PM

Wow your the first to notice what they where :) thanks

Lueegy 07-05-2013 04:30 AM

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bear hat im working on ;3

Lueegy 07-09-2013 12:35 AM

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finished bear hat

Cigam 07-09-2013 12:39 AM

Looks good but remember to think, what the hat is, what texture it has and put that into your hat.

Platinum 07-09-2013 01:39 AM

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Posted by Lueegy (Post 383242)
finished bear hat

Light sourrrrrce. The dead View of the hat, the light is coming from the bottom. The rest have a light source from the top.
Be consistent.

Lueegy 07-11-2013 07:15 PM

FAK on the back view I gorgot to switch it lol

Jester Lapse 07-11-2013 07:18 PM

More contrast.

Lueegy 07-14-2013 04:16 AM

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random ass hat im working on still dont know what it is

Platinum 07-14-2013 06:33 AM

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Posted by Lueegy (Post 386293)
random ass hat im working on still dont know what it is

Light from back and the front? I recommend only one light source.
Also consider texture.

Lueegy 07-15-2013 12:57 AM

texture? im still a nub at this :c

Ivy 07-15-2013 01:01 AM

I love it!

Platinum 07-15-2013 02:16 AM

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Posted by Lueegy (Post 386806)
texture? im still a nub at this :c

Kinda like the difference between glass and fabric, they would be shaded differently right?

Ryan 07-15-2013 04:11 AM

I really like the first one too.

Ivy 07-15-2013 04:29 AM

Yes


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