| Maikeru |
06-02-2012 02:40 AM |
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Posted by MSM Graal
(Post 131205)
Thanks Jester.
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Well if anything, I'll be happy to give you a tip or two on improving
First is the colors. According to Dylan's research, there was a total of 32 colors. Since this is more of an iEra skateboard feel, tone down the wood, yellow, and blue colors to about 3-5 each: the minimum must be 3 (darker color, normal color, lighter color). Since the lighting on the board is focused on the middle, you did a good job at coloring but your colors need to be more vivid. These colors feel entirely plain
The same applies to the back of the board aswell.
Second is detail.. It looks plain. I recommend maybe giving the wheel more of a plastic-like texture (I think that's how it's called) instead of leaving it one color. Also, give some sort of a wood texture to the back of the board
Just my suggestions. If you wish to avoid them, feel free to but you could find these suggestions of mine really useful if you're asking for critique
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