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RileyFiery 04-10-2012 02:20 AM

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Posted by Cigam (Post 93107)
http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...o-launcher.png Haven't posted one of my creations in a long time here. So I made this fun Tomato Launcher! Feedback on my Tomato Launcher please!

Cannon: The shading isn't showing the image's shape that well. It feels flat to me. (Assuming it's a cylindrical shape.)
http://www.graalians.com/forums/atta...1&d=1334020661

Tomato: It doesn't feel like a tomato. Try to darken the bright shade and possibly give the perfect circle some defects.
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedi..._section02.jpg

Cigam 04-10-2012 02:25 AM

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Posted by RileyFiery (Post 93160)
Cannon: The shading isn't showing the image's shape that well. It feels flat to me. (Assuming it's a cylindrical shape.)
http://www.graalians.com/forums/atta...1&d=1334020661

Tomato: It doesn't feel like a tomato. Try to darken the bright shade and possibly give the perfect circle some defects.
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedi..._section02.jpg

Ok thanks. Since your suggesting to touch up pretty much everything, it's gonna be a little hard to edit. Might just make a new launcher or make a new version. Thanks for the feedback and tips though!

Zerith 04-10-2012 02:54 AM

First of all, color choices need a little work. Shading style, even though your dithering, your pillow shading throws off the depth/shape of the object. I think this is due to the fact that your using each shade of red equally, theres just as much light pink as there is dark red. why is that bad? because it doesnt tell people what the REAL color of the object is. If all of the shading was the same length, then what color is the actual color of the object. you must determine WHAT shade of red is your BASE. THEN you darken what areas might need some shade and you lighten the small areas where light will hit the object.

Cigam 04-10-2012 02:57 AM

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Posted by Zerith (Post 93195)
First of all, color choices need a little work. Shading style, even though your dithering, your pillow shading throws off the depth/shape of the object. I think this is due to the fact that your using each shade of red equally, theres just as much light pink as there is dark red. why is that bad? because it doesnt tell people what the REAL color of the object is. If all of the shading was the same length, then what color is the actual color of the object. you must determine WHAT shade of red is your BASE. THEN you darken what areas might need some shade and you lighten the small areas where light will hit the object.

Thanks Zerith. I'll try to make a new version of the Tomato Launcher.

Zerith 04-10-2012 02:59 AM

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Heres an example. its nothing much but i kept the outline of your object and tried to give a little change to it.

Cigam 04-10-2012 03:01 AM

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Posted by Zerith (Post 93200)
Heres an example. its nothing much but i kept the outline of your object and tried to give a little change to it.

Thanks. I'm going for something like that and something like what RileyFiery posted/said.

xSuka 04-10-2012 03:22 AM

Suka likey ... :'D

Cigam 04-10-2012 03:31 AM

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Posted by xSuka (Post 93220)
Suka likey ... :'D

Suka likey my Tomato Launcher?

xSuka 04-10-2012 04:04 AM

Yes, make a pea shotter !

Airspitter 04-10-2012 04:32 AM

Very nice, better than i can do :D

The Doctor 04-10-2012 05:15 AM

Look, ma! I can draw a potatoe!

Elusive 04-10-2012 08:56 AM

Nice work!:D

Cigam 04-10-2012 12:20 PM

Thanks guys! I'mma make an updated version of the Tomato Launcher and then I'll try a Pea Shooter for y'all.

Elusive 04-10-2012 12:28 PM

Good luck Cig<3

Cigam 04-18-2012 10:20 PM

http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...o-launcher.png I have made a Taco Launcher for Cinco De Mayo! Credit goes to Chaotic for the launcher idea. I think I did really good on this one but I would like to hear y'all comments! Feedback please :)


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