It's called tough love and some times it's required for someone to step up. Imo in this latest level the floor is painful to look at and should really be re-thought.

Also get use to Skyzer, his not an ass, just very critical on peoples work although i'll say now he's an exceptional level maker.

Tricxta is there anything you want me to make? And that bathroom one isn't good because of the floor tiles and I made each side equal in objects. I shall fix it later.

Practice more

Skyzer is the best critic in Graal. He looks at something and knows exactly whatto say. Unlike most of us he's played beautifully designed games (not ****ing games with pretty aesthetics) and knows what looks good and doesn't. I believe that is Skyzer doesn't like it, it's not good enough. If I'm using a level and Skyzer doesn't like it, I'll redo it.

You are really getting better. Every post is a improvement of your levels. Keep going and you can get somewhere with it on Graal.

There you go. You stated it on your own.

Whatever. I say to you, Defective Noob... Think for yourself. I'm sure you can get better without this "tough love" talk. I think the treatment is disturbingly idiotic.

Good practice would be create a grass to beach to water transition all in the same level while keeping it looking good and not crowded. Then try wack a building onto the level and try make it look as though it fits there without any custom tiles.

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/8785/bathroomt.png
By ken914graal at 2012-01-25

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/259...mwitshower.png
By ken914graal at 2012-01-25

How did you learn? I can't seem to make a good house...

Just practice. Think of real houses, and what they look like on the inside.

People should stop talk for me.

^Me cAveMan

they are
better than what i can do cause i dont want to pay money. but they are kinda crappy.

O.O

I meant "talking for me." :(

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5107/playerrules.png
By ken914graal at 2012-01-26

http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/2...yerrules11.png
By ken914graal at 2012-01-26

This is basically the Era Rules Room from PC. I think we need one on iEra too. Thats what i have so far. If you have never seen the one on PC, diffrent rules will go on each bookcase. Like if you hack then you will get banned for 15155616556156156years. You know, things like that.

Exams are now done so it's time to crack out some levels this weekend! Tell me what I should add to this level. Accepting all my haters and lovers to comment.

(It is not finished)

Too empty. Fill up those empty spaces with tables, couches, etc.

Yea I can do that in the far back, and maybe some plants and such in the middle of the bookcases or something around that area.

Red areas are where some stuff should be, as there is a lot of empty space in those areas.
http://www.graalians.com/forums/atta...8&d=1327626911

Just what I was thinking, thanks. I will work on that later or tomorrow. :D

Also, put pictures,lights, etc. on the walls, I only put one circle on the wall when in the top two spaces there is empty wall space that should be filled as well.

Fix the top right bookcases they need to be one space down.

Fixed it a few mins ago but thx :D. I might finish it soon.

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/378...rrules1111.png
By ken914graal at 2012-01-26

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5...999999999e.png
By ken914graal at 2012-01-26

Much better! It's just a little crowded behind the desk, and the top left area still looks a little bare, I think a table would make it look complete.

Table would be to much. Im still gonna change some stuff. Gotta collect more images