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Cigam 03-31-2012 06:04 PM
http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...SAIGA12G-1.png Tried making a SAIGA 12g. First ever gun I have created! Feedback please!

RileyFiery 03-31-2012 06:43 PM
Lower the front sight a bit, and shorten the distance between the handle and trigger. Other than those small peeves I have it with it, it's pretty nice so good job mate.

Cigam 03-31-2012 06:48 PM
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Posted by RileyFiery (Post 87602)
Lower the front sight a bit, and shorten the distance between the handle and trigger. Other than those small peeves I have it with it, it's pretty nice so good job mate.
Thanks.

EDIT: In the signature box, on the gun template. Where i'm putting my far hand isnt actually supposed to go there. It's supposed to go on the trigger which is foward of the handle. Sorry if this caused any confusion. I honestly don't know why I placed the hand there... And I put the hand where the clip is supposed to be.. my god what the hell is wrong with me.

RileyFiery 03-31-2012 09:07 PM
What you just said caused me a great deal of confusion. Are you saying that you have one hand on the handle, and one on the trigger? I don't think you should go with that design because it doesn't make sense.

Move the trigger next to the handle (look in Saiga thread for examples) so the hand on the handle can pull the trigger. Then the spot where the trigger was you could place your other hand to hold the weapon.

Rok 04-06-2012 03:33 PM
Love the alien hat. I'd definitely buy/wear it as is. Your sword needs a better outline, and more shading. And Riley covered the gun already :)

Cigam 04-06-2012 03:55 PM
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Posted by Rok (Post 90900)
Love the alien hat. I'd definitely buy/wear it as is. Your sword needs a better outline, and more shading. And Riley covered the gun already :)
Thanks. And about your Alien Hat comment: I might give it to iEra or iClassic to put in a shop if they feel like it but i'm not sure.

SkyLapse 04-06-2012 04:43 PM
it looks really sketchy with bad shading and a trigger to far up and a ******ed front sight. EDIT IT!

Cigam 04-06-2012 04:52 PM
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Posted by SkyLapse (Post 90946)
it looks really sketchy with bad shading and a trigger to far up and a ******ed front sight. EDIT IT!
I know that's all true sir but it's my first gun so, what do you expect?

Elusive 04-06-2012 08:25 PM
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Posted by BroozeB (Post 70114)
Seems like you're doing huge shapes and trying to shade them with the gradient tool. Focus on doing more pixel-pixel work rather than just drawing a huge vague shape and calling it a ninja helmet. You did this more with the AFK mask but it lacks texture and shading near vital areas.
I have never liked hats similar to Chillax Combo and therefore I have nothing to say about it, but the Top Hat is nice.
Well done, these pieces of work show that you have imagination and are creative. But as Brooze harshly stated, they need texture and detailed shading for effect. Your ideas deserve a polished look.

Clear enough :)

Cigam 04-06-2012 08:30 PM
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Posted by Elusive (Post 91018)
Well done, these pieces of work show that you have imagination and are creative. But as Brooze harshly stated, they need texture and detailed shading for effect. Your ideas deserve a polished look.

Clear enough :)
Yes thanks.

Tizzee 04-07-2012 06:17 PM
Yo! Cool graphics, youve improvent alot, from the hats you posted first, to the saiga you made. Keep it up man :)

Cigam 04-07-2012 06:19 PM
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Posted by Tizzee (Post 91587)
Yo! Cool graphics, youve improvent alot, from the hats you posted first, to the saiga you made. Keep it up man :)
Yes thank you Tizzee. I haven't posted a hat on here in a while, might make one and post one today.

Cigam 04-10-2012 12:25 AM
http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...o-launcher.png Haven't posted one of my creations in a long time here. So I made this fun Tomato Launcher! Feedback on my Tomato Launcher please!

Kendama 04-10-2012 01:23 AM
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Posted by Cigam (Post 87589)
http://i1122.photobucket.com/albums/...SAIGA12G-1.png Tried making a SAIGA 12g. First ever gun I have created! Feedback please!
Nice gun Ciggy.

Cigam 04-10-2012 01:46 AM
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Posted by Kendama (Post 93137)
Nice gun Ciggy.
Thanks Ken.


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