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Maxy 04-16-2012 10:25 AM

those levels looked crap. The water was not natural looking but more of a line of blue and the island one, the island looked likes a few lines put together and didn't look like a island. Door to a cave is missing and looks like a rectangle and the beach doesn't look like a beach basically my grandma could make better levels.

David K? 04-16-2012 11:32 PM

Maxy, for new people trying things, you should try not doing negative reinforcement. It usually does not make others get better. ;D

I would however like to see a video of your grandmother making levels though if you don't mind...

Skyzer 04-17-2012 06:14 PM

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Posted by David K? (Post 96905)
Maxy, for new people trying things, you should try not doing negative reinforcement. It usually does not make others get better. ;D

I would however like to see a video of your grandmother making levels though if you don't mind...

Stop trying to suck everyone's ****. If nobody received negative feedback people wouldn't have a reason to do anything better.

Shurikan 04-18-2012 12:47 AM

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Posted by Skyzer

Stop trying to suck everyone's ****. If nobody received negative feedback people wouldn't have a reason to do anything better.

Shut up sky I don't understand how your aloud to still roam these forums.

Skyzer 04-18-2012 05:42 AM

Simply answer. Spooon.

David K? 04-19-2012 04:59 AM

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Posted by Skyzer (Post 97460)
Stop trying to suck everyone's ****. If nobody received negative feedback people wouldn't have a reason to do anything better.

You can give positive constructive criticism that can be looked at as harsh. It is my choice whether or not I prefer to be nice or rude to others. :]

I might try to have kind comments back to you, still against you, yet I doubt many would call it 'sucking your ****'. I just prefer not to use harsh language or flame.

Anyway, more on topic... Sadly I'm not very organized so I don't have names :/.. Late newcomers, old people kicked... some switched around... Sorry.



Room - 02 : Askew was hired as a LAT. : Well done.
Could Fix: Redundancy in tables, one rock if picked up would show a tile error, fence pieces could be layered in the future.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/47b9af55.png

Room - 04 : Not bad.
Could Fix: Missing corner pieces, chairs look odd around the table but uses nice perspective which is a plus. Once again could use layers for the top part of the pole fence thing, and I need to redo the corner house piece.

Could use more details to the ground.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/68d0f1a4.png

Room - 05 : Good job.
Could Fix: I forgot to clear my block. D: The level looks alright, however the bushes through the grass ridges don't look that great. Almost as if saying the ridges aren't making the ground go up or down.. Can't really fix it but to redo the bushes not over many ridges. The house is kind of funky too... Other than that the level looks decent. I've used transitions like this in the past, however sometimes it doesn't look great, layers should fix it. (The road and grass) Also, some bushes can be hit and show errors.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/1e259e2c.png

Room - 06 : Not too bad.
Could Fix: A 2x2 dirt hole type tiles are creating a tile error in a grass corner, and the roof looks slightly plain... Also, some rock shadow looks kind of odd and would be weird if picked up. I've helped tell you about one bush line, but the other two were left with black edges. Could do a little better for the ground details but you did alright. Also, the roads are too small on the bottom, and look too natural.. but the place looks like a mansion so could possibly be as such.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/cdf68517.png

Room - 07 : Alright
Could Fix: The house looks semi alright, the top is slightly too far up front, and some of the walls are using wall ends which I've mentioned in the past.
This level looks too symmetrical and has tile errors / missing grass corner pieces. More details and ridging could be added. The entrance is just weird though...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/afc16d6d.png

Room - 10 : Zolton - Alright
This level is definitely unique... However, it is also full of tile errors, and some not even because I believe you have the wrong tileset. Need to work on the ground details like ridging and details in general, but overall the creativity is good.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/8ef2fca7.png

Room - 15 : ._o
Could Fix: Well.. It did look like someone did actually try and start something... Yeah...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/8d21bc00.png

Room - 20 : Good start.
Could Fix: Well.. can't say too much.. there really are no details but the bushes are missing the correct corner tiles. I also like that you are using a small tilesheet in the top left. I think the roads are too ... perfect? and not that natural in a rural area. Not sure why there are chests on the roof.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/38549f2c.png


Some of these houses were way too big.

Should there be a final assignment or should this be it? I feel like for this being the first assignment some of you have learned a lot so far.

The next assignment will be quest like.

Era News 04-21-2012 11:26 PM

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Posted by Skyzer
I think you missed the point. I was calling Zodiac's levels crap.

LOL

David K? 04-24-2012 05:32 AM

The contest is almost over. :3

Era News 04-25-2012 02:13 AM

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Posted by David K?
The contest is almost over. :3

Wait so this isn't over yet?!

David K? 04-25-2012 06:52 AM

By the end of this month the winners will be picked, and the second assignment will be over.

Era News 04-25-2012 08:27 AM

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Posted by David K? (Post 102106)
By the end of this month the winners will be picked, and the second assignment will be over.

cool might try out but windows 8 stuffed my CPU up yet again

David K? 04-26-2012 02:08 AM

Sure. :]
Of course you are far too late for the contest, but you may try out to be LAT.

David K? 04-30-2012 01:47 AM

LAT Contest is being extended two weeks due to finals. :[
You all have an extra two weeks for those who are in it.

Won't be ending tomorrow.

David K? 05-03-2012 10:27 PM

I also will not be online as often for these two weeks.
Still have a 12 page essay, two presentations, as well as a few other things I need finished. :/

CujoDaMan 08-02-2012 12:45 AM

Is anyone still intrested in doing Development for Shaded Legend?

Johnaudi 08-02-2012 01:45 PM

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Posted by CujoDaMan (Post 172131)
Is anyone still intrested in doing Development for Shaded Legend?

What are you still looking for? I got some friends with a talent.

CujoDaMan 08-02-2012 09:57 PM

I'm looking for Ganiers, Scripters and Levelers.

Tricxta 08-10-2012 07:37 AM

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Posted by CujoDaMan (Post 172864)
I'm looking for Ganiers, Scripters and Levelers.

oh you

MattKan 08-10-2012 07:11 PM

Did anybody ever win this

MSM 08-11-2012 03:29 PM

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Posted by CujoDaMan (Post 172864)
I'm looking for Ganiers, Scripters and Levelers.

I could be a Gani Artist for your server :P (hahahaha)

Emera 08-11-2012 03:44 PM

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Posted by CujoDaMan (Post 172864)
I'm looking for Ganiers, Scripters and Levelers.

How's SL doing?


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