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those levels looked crap. The water was not natural looking but more of a line of blue and the island one, the island looked likes a few lines put together and didn't look like a island. Door to a cave is missing and looks like a rectangle and the beach doesn't look like a beach basically my grandma could make better levels.
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Maxy, for new people trying things, you should try not doing negative reinforcement. It usually does not make others get better. ;D
I would however like to see a video of your grandmother making levels though if you don't mind... |
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Simply answer. Spooon.
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I might try to have kind comments back to you, still against you, yet I doubt many would call it 'sucking your ****'. I just prefer not to use harsh language or flame. Anyway, more on topic... Sadly I'm not very organized so I don't have names :/.. Late newcomers, old people kicked... some switched around... Sorry. Room - 02 : Askew was hired as a LAT. : Well done. Could Fix: Redundancy in tables, one rock if picked up would show a tile error, fence pieces could be layered in the future. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/47b9af55.png Room - 04 : Not bad. Could Fix: Missing corner pieces, chairs look odd around the table but uses nice perspective which is a plus. Once again could use layers for the top part of the pole fence thing, and I need to redo the corner house piece. Could use more details to the ground. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/68d0f1a4.png Room - 05 : Good job. Could Fix: I forgot to clear my block. D: The level looks alright, however the bushes through the grass ridges don't look that great. Almost as if saying the ridges aren't making the ground go up or down.. Can't really fix it but to redo the bushes not over many ridges. The house is kind of funky too... Other than that the level looks decent. I've used transitions like this in the past, however sometimes it doesn't look great, layers should fix it. (The road and grass) Also, some bushes can be hit and show errors. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/1e259e2c.png Room - 06 : Not too bad. Could Fix: A 2x2 dirt hole type tiles are creating a tile error in a grass corner, and the roof looks slightly plain... Also, some rock shadow looks kind of odd and would be weird if picked up. I've helped tell you about one bush line, but the other two were left with black edges. Could do a little better for the ground details but you did alright. Also, the roads are too small on the bottom, and look too natural.. but the place looks like a mansion so could possibly be as such. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/cdf68517.png Room - 07 : Alright Could Fix: The house looks semi alright, the top is slightly too far up front, and some of the walls are using wall ends which I've mentioned in the past. This level looks too symmetrical and has tile errors / missing grass corner pieces. More details and ridging could be added. The entrance is just weird though... http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/afc16d6d.png Room - 10 : Zolton - Alright This level is definitely unique... However, it is also full of tile errors, and some not even because I believe you have the wrong tileset. Need to work on the ground details like ridging and details in general, but overall the creativity is good. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/8ef2fca7.png Room - 15 : ._o Could Fix: Well.. It did look like someone did actually try and start something... Yeah... http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/8d21bc00.png Room - 20 : Good start. Could Fix: Well.. can't say too much.. there really are no details but the bushes are missing the correct corner tiles. I also like that you are using a small tilesheet in the top left. I think the roads are too ... perfect? and not that natural in a rural area. Not sure why there are chests on the roof. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...t/38549f2c.png Some of these houses were way too big. Should there be a final assignment or should this be it? I feel like for this being the first assignment some of you have learned a lot so far. The next assignment will be quest like. |
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The contest is almost over. :3
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By the end of this month the winners will be picked, and the second assignment will be over.
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Sure. :]
Of course you are far too late for the contest, but you may try out to be LAT. |
LAT Contest is being extended two weeks due to finals. :[
You all have an extra two weeks for those who are in it. Won't be ending tomorrow. |
I also will not be online as often for these two weeks.
Still have a 12 page essay, two presentations, as well as a few other things I need finished. :/ |
Is anyone still intrested in doing Development for Shaded Legend?
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I'm looking for Ganiers, Scripters and Levelers.
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Did anybody ever win this
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