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4-Lom

02-16-2017 02:38 AM

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Posted by Springy (Post 765197)

how does this look so far?

Pop tarts have sprinkles.

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com...e40d01d20a.jpg

Also...

https://media.licdn.com/mpr/mpr/AAEA...YzkyYzZkZg.jpg

Springy

02-16-2017 02:42 AM

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Posted by 4-Lom (Post 765202)

Pop tarts have sprinkles.

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com...e40d01d20a.jpg

Also...

https://media.licdn.com/mpr/mpr/AAEA...YzkyYzZkZg.jpg

I'm aware, I just started -w-

4-Lom

02-16-2017 02:44 AM

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Posted by Springy (Post 765203)

I'm aware, I just started -w-

I realized shortly after posting that it may come off as rude... I was kinda going for a joke about 'real women have curves' vs 'real pop tarts have sprinkles'

Cheers and good luck!

Springy

02-16-2017 02:51 AM

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Posted by Striken (Post 765200)

Don't use a black outline for the pop tart, also have the top spread not be a square.

what do you mean by not be a square

Kendrick

02-16-2017 03:28 AM

Sweet!

Lego	02-16-2017 05:11 AM

http://i.imgur.com/0da57U7.png
So I worked on it a bit more but I'm not sure if the background seems a little bit to empty still, and I'm not to sure if I went to heavy on the shadow at the bottom of all the strokes to kind of make it seem like it pops out a bit more. All CC welcome, thanks.

Sun*	02-16-2017 11:28 AM

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Posted by Coco (Post 765192)

I would suggest trying to make the half heart more distinguishable on both of those. Like make the crack in the egg deeper so you can easily see that it's cracked in half, and doing something other than a recolor for the bomb (though I guess making it blink it ok...but i would still suggest something more distinguishable if possible).

sure

http://i.imgur.com/wNOTeSa.png

how is it looking

Basil

02-16-2017 11:38 AM

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Posted by Sun* (Post 765296)

sure

http://i.imgur.com/wNOTeSa.png

how is it looking

looking good.. maybe make the (back) shell cracks lower?? for the sake of making it look more like a half heart.. :- ))

4-Lom

02-16-2017 12:50 PM

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Update. Took the stopper out of the 'used' ones... and inverted the "HEY LISTEN" message notification fairy wing colors.

SomeGuy

02-16-2017 12:53 PM

Someone should do a dinner plate and when its half heart all the food has been eaten off it.

4-Lom

02-16-2017 12:57 PM

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Posted by Basil (Post 765297)

looking good.. maybe make the (back) shell cracks lower?? for the sake of making it look more like a half heart.. :- ))

Or maybe really deepen the shadows 'inside' the egg to make it dark and pronounced?

Bryan*

02-16-2017 01:00 PM

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Posted by 4-Lom (Post 765302)

Attachment 23466

Update. Took the stopper out of the 'used' ones... and inverted the "HEY LISTEN" message notification fairy wing colors.

Was thinking if you can make the half hearted one spill over

4-Lom

02-16-2017 01:02 PM

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Posted by Bryan* (Post 765306)

Was thinking if you can make the half hearted one spill over

Would look cool, for sure... trying to picture the perspective on that makes me shudder thinking of the light sources while fitting it into frame :P

My inspiration was the "Elixer Soup" from Legend of Zelda Wind Waker... The 'two uses' of the soup, coupled with the traditional red colored health potion :)