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Jester Lapse · 01-20-2013

Supposed to be a vehicle. Hover tank or just a ship not sure yet

Really basic right now.
What do you think could be improved on?

Talon · 01-20-2013

Top and bottom view angle/perspective seem to conflict, but other than that, very nice.

Tyler · 01-20-2013

Really nice job so far. I really don't see anything that needs changing.

Dylan · 01-20-2013

-moar contrast
-some hue shifts in the colors
-fix the perspective as talon said above
-add some AA and fix the jaggies

Zerith · 01-20-2013

I know you used a light source perhaps directly in front or above the object. That is fine, however you would need a few more shades to fully portray the complex volume of the object you have drawn. To make things easier, I changed the light source to the left of the object so that I would not have to add more shades to your object (I actually added 2 more though). With the light source being to the left and your object being somewhat of a pyramid type, it was easy to portray the volume whereas if it was directly on top it would be a lot more difficult and you'd need more shades to give it that depth. Here is a quick edit.

Era News · 01-20-2013

Posted by Zerith

I know you used a light source perhaps directly in front or above the object. That is fine, however you would need a few more shades to fully portray the complex volume of the object you have drawn. To make things easier, I changed the light source to the left of the object so that I would not have to add more shades to your object (I actually added 2 more though). With the light source being to the left and your object being somewhat of a pyramid type, it was easy to portray the volume whereas if it was directly on top it would be a lot more difficult and you'd need more shades to give it that depth. Here is a quick edit.

Holy crap that looks much better!

Jester Lapse · 01-20-2013

Posted by Zerith

I know you used a light source perhaps directly in front or above the object. That is fine, however you would need a few more shades to fully portray the complex volume of the object you have drawn. To make things easier, I changed the light source to the left of the object so that I would not have to add more shades to your object (I actually added 2 more though). With the light source being to the left and your object being somewhat of a pyramid type, it was easy to portray the volume whereas if it was directly on top it would be a lot more difficult and you'd need more shades to give it that depth. Here is a quick edit.

as always, still teaching me <3 ty for the visual.

and thanks to the rest for feedback as well

JakeRage · 01-20-2013

I can see it now, a new mission that involves you using this tank to dodge/fight through a battlefield and attack the hovership to the tank and make it back through the battlefield. Kinda like frogger, but you can shoot stuff instead of just dodging.

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Jester Lapse zzz Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: WA USA Posts: 9,232	Feedback Le Art Supposed to be a vehicle. Hover tank or just a ship not sure yet Really basic right now. What do you think could be improved on?

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Talon don't call it a comeback Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 8,268	Top and bottom view angle/perspective seem to conflict, but other than that, very nice.

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Tyler Dark Desert Fox Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: United States, Ohio Posts: 5,720	Really nice job so far. I really don't see anything that needs changing.

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Dylan Custom User Title Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Australia Posts: 2,534	-moar contrast -some hue shifts in the colors -fix the perspective as talon said above -add some AA and fix the jaggies

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Zerith Guest Posts: n/a	I know you used a light source perhaps directly in front or above the object. That is fine, however you would need a few more shades to fully portray the complex volume of the object you have drawn. To make things easier, I changed the light source to the left of the object so that I would not have to add more shades to your object (I actually added 2 more though). With the light source being to the left and your object being somewhat of a pyramid type, it was easy to portray the volume whereas if it was directly on top it would be a lot more difficult and you'd need more shades to give it that depth. Here is a quick edit. Attached Thumbnails

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JakeRage Pixel Artist In Training Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Michigan Posts: 349	I can see it now, a new mission that involves you using this tank to dodge/fight through a battlefield and attack the hovership to the tank and make it back through the battlefield. Kinda like frogger, but you can shoot stuff instead of just dodging.